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Array ( [sid] => 56314 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You do stupid things while in love. [time] => 2004-07-15 18:39:34 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Looking at the mirror
can't believe my life is this way
my eyes filled up with fear
i talk but i have nothing to say

I made one mistake
and things go down the drain
my heart aches
i think I'm going insane

You said you loved me
but i didn't say i loved you back
then you said that you could see
the commitment that i lack

Since the day you left
i wish i could've said
what i truly felt
and i think about it every time i lay in bed

i stopped trying in school
i stopped talking on the phone
i stopped going to the pool
i mope around alone

my life is rotting away
it's a deathly diesease
and all i can say
i want the hurt to seize

I want the pain
not to show
I want to stop the rain.
I have put myself in an all time low

Why did i make that mistake?
Why didn't i speak up?
Why did i miss the chance to take?
Because Im in love!


[comments] => 2 [counter] => 158 [topic] => 22 [informant] => pyrochick [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
You do stupid things while in love.

Contributed by pyrochick on Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 06:39:34 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



Looking at the mirror
can't believe my life is this way
my eyes filled up with fear
i talk but i have nothing to say

I made one mistake
and things go down the drain
my heart aches
i think I'm going insane

You said you loved me
but i didn't say i loved you back
then you said that you could see
the commitment that i lack

Since the day you left
i wish i could've said
what i truly felt
and i think about it every time i lay in bed

i stopped trying in school
i stopped talking on the phone
i stopped going to the pool
i mope around alone

my life is rotting away
it's a deathly diesease
and all i can say
i want the hurt to seize

I want the pain
not to show
I want to stop the rain.
I have put myself in an all time low

Why did i make that mistake?
Why didn't i speak up?
Why did i miss the chance to take?
Because Im in love!






Copyright © pyrochick ... [ 2004-07-15 18:39:34]
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Re: You do stupid things while in love. (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 06:42:49 PM AEST
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Awww beautifully written and very sad...

pixie xx


Re: You do stupid things while in love. (User Rating: 1 )
by gery_giggles on Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 09:01:08 PM AEST
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you make mistakes and learn by them...good poem,i enjoyed it^_^
luv always




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