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Array ( [sid] => 56370 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => suicidal lover [time] => 2004-07-16 09:06:43 [hometext] => i must of cried a thousand times over you...ive cried my last tear...kissed my last love.... [bodytext] => there's nobody left in this world to kiss goodnight
'cept you lingering on beside me
i dont want this to last
i dont love you
im a suicidal lover
i want to kill this love
kill myself
dont come home to me
dont speak
shut those lips tight
and watch this star fall
silently out the sky
catch me an burry me underneath the church yard
five pointed stars turn my way
silver bullets shoot above me
and stakes penertrate my skin
the morge doors open
and shadows drift searching for me
i killed myself for you
i pushed the dagger as far as it would go
there's only one thing you should know
i tried so hard to love you that i ended up hating every feature about you
your breathe as it circilated your body
your hair as the wind blew it
your lips creasing as you smiled
my last waking thoughts are of you
and i realise
i did love you
i was just confused and not ready to hold hands
and cross that bridge
and i die holding my sin
sin of love
and i open my mouth
and a bright white dove flies over the dark sky
lightening its path to guide you on your way...
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 158 [topic] => 36 [informant] => Hannah_Heaven [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
suicidal lover

Contributed by Hannah_Heaven on Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 09:06:43 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



there's nobody left in this world to kiss goodnight
'cept you lingering on beside me
i dont want this to last
i dont love you
im a suicidal lover
i want to kill this love
kill myself
dont come home to me
dont speak
shut those lips tight
and watch this star fall
silently out the sky
catch me an burry me underneath the church yard
five pointed stars turn my way
silver bullets shoot above me
and stakes penertrate my skin
the morge doors open
and shadows drift searching for me
i killed myself for you
i pushed the dagger as far as it would go
there's only one thing you should know
i tried so hard to love you that i ended up hating every feature about you
your breathe as it circilated your body
your hair as the wind blew it
your lips creasing as you smiled
my last waking thoughts are of you
and i realise
i did love you
i was just confused and not ready to hold hands
and cross that bridge
and i die holding my sin
sin of love
and i open my mouth
and a bright white dove flies over the dark sky
lightening its path to guide you on your way...




Copyright © Hannah_Heaven ... [ 2004-07-16 09:06:43]
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Re: suicidal lover (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 11:54:19 AM AEST
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Awww this is so sad.....beutaiful and tragic all rolled into one,

pixie xx




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