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Array ( [sid] => 56372 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You innocent fool [time] => 2004-07-16 09:52:19 [hometext] => Poor guy, going to such lengths to find something he will later regret. He should be more careful about the friendships he turns down to achieve it though. [bodytext] => He's changed, has my friend,
Far too much, to forget
What was said, or to mend
What's been broken, and yet

There's no sense of loss,
No pain, or regret.
Just a bridge to be crossed
A fear to be met

I don't mind that he's gone
But the reasons are hiding
There was no game to be won
But the pressure was mounting

He said I was 'whingy
Snidey and spiteful'
The way you treated Nelly
Was the same, it was pityfull

The excuses that you gave
Didn't stand true
Stop acting so brave
'Cause who did we lose to?

They're not worth the writing
You can guess the 'type'
That's why i gave up fighting
Each and every, a little ****

The results were so predictable
Of your little hunt
So desperate, it's adorable,
To get your wang in some girls a **** [comments] => 1 [counter] => 146 [topic] => 55 [informant] => gherkin [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => dedicatedpoems )

You innocent fool

Contributed by gherkin on Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 09:52:19 AM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

He's changed, has my friend,
Far too much, to forget
What was said, or to mend
What's been broken, and yet

There's no sense of loss,
No pain, or regret.
Just a bridge to be crossed
A fear to be met

I don't mind that he's gone
But the reasons are hiding
There was no game to be won
But the pressure was mounting

He said I was 'whingy
Snidey and spiteful'
The way you treated Nelly
Was the same, it was pityfull

The excuses that you gave
Didn't stand true
Stop acting so brave
'Cause who did we lose to?

They're not worth the writing
You can guess the 'type'
That's why i gave up fighting
Each and every, a little ****

The results were so predictable
Of your little hunt
So desperate, it's adorable,
To get your wang in some girls a ****

Copyright © gherkin ... [ 2004-07-16 09:52:19]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: You innocent fool (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 02:42:51 PM AEST
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Watch spelling. pitiful, whiney, and I'm not sure snidey is a word. Interesting write from a young perspective. Cheers!

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