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Array ( [sid] => 56381 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Depth of a Hazard [time] => 2004-07-16 11:36:05 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I'm on my way out,
to a place I've never been.
A place where it
always rains and the sun
never shines.
A place where nobody lives,
it only exists in my head.

I wish I could escape,
turn my life around,
but the impossiblity is so great,
and I fall behind.

I'm about to crack
into a million pieces.
Falling together
on the bare floor.
A different me,
a pile of rubbish.
Swept away in to nothing.
You won't see me anymore.

I wish I could escape,
turn my life around,
but the impossiblity is so great,
and I fall behind.

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Depth of a Hazard

Contributed by Sirena_Degana on Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 11:36:05 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

I'm on my way out,
to a place I've never been.
A place where it
always rains and the sun
never shines.
A place where nobody lives,
it only exists in my head.

I wish I could escape,
turn my life around,
but the impossiblity is so great,
and I fall behind.

I'm about to crack
into a million pieces.
Falling together
on the bare floor.
A different me,
a pile of rubbish.
Swept away in to nothing.
You won't see me anymore.

I wish I could escape,
turn my life around,
but the impossiblity is so great,
and I fall behind.

Copyright © Sirena_Degana ... [ 2004-07-16 11:36:05]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Depth of a Hazard (User Rating: 1 )
by ArdRi79 on Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 11:47:35 AM AEST
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I really feel the despair in this peom, the way you structured the stanzas really hammered your words home 4 me, well written.

Re: Depth of a Hazard (User Rating: 1 )
by waos on Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 09:23:06 PM AEST
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it's good. i liked it.

Re: Depth of a Hazard (User Rating: 1 )
by DarkFey on Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 10:13:30 PM AEST
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Your format on this write was perfect. The message and the emotions displayed are ones that I think everyone can identify with at some point. Great write!! DarkFey

Re: Depth of a Hazard (User Rating: 1 )
by pvd on Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 10:44:38 AM AEST
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The sorrow of lonliness potrayed well.
Keep it up.
PVD

Re: Depth of a Hazard (User Rating: 1 )
by richcol7522 on Friday, 27th August 2004 @ 08:59:10 AM AEST
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this is a deep wirte.. good job. I know how you feel I have been there before. But it always gets better.

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