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Array ( [sid] => 56389 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Go Away Life [time] => 2004-07-16 12:05:55 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Go away life, leave me alone,
I can’t stand that morbid tone,
That you play into my ears all day,
I can’t take no more what else can I say?

You are the victor in our war,
You have more than settled the score,
What did I ever do to you,
For you to make my colour so blue.

All I want is to be happy & feel love,
But you like to kick & give me a shove,
Beat me into total submission,
Sending me to extradition.

You follow me like a puppy dog,
Sticking spanners in my cog,
Taunting me, polluting my thoughts,
Continuing your cruel blood sport

Your bite is worse than your bark,
You turn off the light leaving me in the dark,
Dangling my fears in front of my face,
Sending me to that damned awful place.


[comments] => 6 [counter] => 148 [topic] => 54 [informant] => pixie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => happypoetry )
Go Away Life

Contributed by pixie on Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 12:05:55 PM in AEST
Topic: happypoetry



Go away life, leave me alone,
I can’t stand that morbid tone,
That you play into my ears all day,
I can’t take no more what else can I say?

You are the victor in our war,
You have more than settled the score,
What did I ever do to you,
For you to make my colour so blue.

All I want is to be happy & feel love,
But you like to kick & give me a shove,
Beat me into total submission,
Sending me to extradition.

You follow me like a puppy dog,
Sticking spanners in my cog,
Taunting me, polluting my thoughts,
Continuing your cruel blood sport

Your bite is worse than your bark,
You turn off the light leaving me in the dark,
Dangling my fears in front of my face,
Sending me to that damned awful place.






Copyright © pixie ... [ 2004-07-16 12:05:55]
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Re: Go Away Life (User Rating: 1 )
by RhythmBndt on Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 12:09:25 PM AEST
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That doesn't sound like Happyu Poetry :-/


Re: Go Away Life (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 12:11:24 PM AEST
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Damn, I put it under the wrong subject...... what I am like, having ablonde moment me thinks lolol

sorry about that.
pixie xx


Re: Go Away Life (User Rating: 1 )
by Luinil on Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 02:13:59 PM AEST
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haha, not so happy but a very nice dark poem


Re: Go Away Life (User Rating: 1 )
by hrpuffnstuff on Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 06:54:12 AM AEST
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aw one of your best krissy.
dont forget im here when u need to chat
lots of hugs
hayleyxxxxxxxxxxxxx


Re: Go Away Life (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 02:14:42 AM AEST
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Aah..krissy love..be couragious..:-) venkat


Re: Go Away Life (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 01:33:26 PM AEST
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beautiful expression of feelings in this poem, but im more inclined to just give you a **huge hug** you deserve so much happiness and more and more:) hugs n' love nessa

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