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Array ( [sid] => 56499 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => to you [time] => 2004-07-17 04:32:42 [hometext] => when you are crying over a boy and your trying to find reasons for your emotions [bodytext] => This is what you make me do
Lay here night and day
Crying over nothing
Because that is what you truly are, nothing
But I think of you as this flawless jewel.
Why is my perception so screwed up
Reality was never near,
I never used to realize this.
I would only thrive off what I believed
To be my only provider
What I believed made me truly happy
But in the end I only feel worse
So much time and emotions
All invested into one thing
Now that it is thrashed
What am I suppose to do
Try to start off brand new
Learning how to do
Everything all over again
Only to know that in the end
I will be in my bed
Crying over nothing
Laying there night and day
Because
This is what you make me do

[comments] => 4 [counter] => 190 [topic] => 22 [informant] => jsizzle [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

to you

Contributed by jsizzle on Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 04:32:42 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

This is what you make me do
Lay here night and day
Crying over nothing
Because that is what you truly are, nothing
But I think of you as this flawless jewel.
Why is my perception so screwed up
Reality was never near,
I never used to realize this.
I would only thrive off what I believed
To be my only provider
What I believed made me truly happy
But in the end I only feel worse
So much time and emotions
All invested into one thing
Now that it is thrashed
What am I suppose to do
Try to start off brand new
Learning how to do
Everything all over again
Only to know that in the end
I will be in my bed
Crying over nothing
Laying there night and day
Because
This is what you make me do

Copyright © jsizzle ... [ 2004-07-17 04:32:42]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: to you (User Rating: 1 )
by buchi on Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 06:30:30 AM AEST
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This poem is my personal idea of excellence!!!
Unique elaboration ...of the mind...

Re: to you (User Rating: 1 )
by rightwingbrknwing on Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 07:24:01 AM AEST
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absolutly wonderful, you must've felt some kind of relief after writing this cuz i think that everything you meant to express came through beautifuly

Re: to you (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 09:03:21 AM AEST
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hope you felt better after writing this... I know I would have... very good write, I can relate.

Re: to you (User Rating: 1 )
by KurdtBeantheWIKKED on Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 02:56:42 PM AEST
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He's that light sneeze in the morning.
not the flu
just a sneeze
keep that in mind

Great poem!

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