Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!
Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com    Poems On Site: 198,500+   Comments On Poems: 427,000+   Forum Posts: 105,000+
Custom Search
  Welcome ! Home  ·  FAQ  ·  Topics  ·  Web Links  ·  Your Account  ·  Submit Poetry  ·  Top 30  ·  OldSite Link 02-June 12:32:31 AEST  
  Menu
  Home
· Micks Shop
· Our eBay Store· Error Submit
 Poetry
· Submit Poetry
· Least Read Poems
· Topics
· Members Listing
· Old Site Post 2001
· Old Site Pre 2001
· Poetry Archive
· Public Domain Poetry
 Stories
· Stories (NEW ! )
· Submit Story
· Story Topics
· Stories Archive
· Story Search
  Community
· Our Poetry Forums
· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

  Site Help
· FAQ
· Feedback

  Members Areas
· Your Account
· Members Journals
· Premium Sign-Up
  Premium Section
· Special Section
· Premium Poems
· Premium Submit
· Premium Search
· Premium Top
· Premium Archive
· Premium Topics
 Fun & Games

· Jokes
· Bubble Puzzle
· ConnectN
· Cross Word
· Cross Word Easy
· Drag Puzzle
· Word Hunt
 Reference
· Dictionary
· Dictionary (Rhyming)
· Site Updates
· Content
· Special Content
 Search
· Search
· Web Links
· All Links
 Top
· Top 30
  Help This Site
· Donations
 Others
· Recipes
· Moderators
Our Other Sites
· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

  Social

Array ( [sid] => 56612 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => If I had the chance to fall in love again [time] => 2004-07-18 09:18:54 [hometext] => I thought long and hard about this song because... [bodytext] => Introduction:
I wrote this song shortly before I left the church I was going to. This was a very tough decision for me because I was a member for over 11 years. The fact is that we both made mistakes that hurt each other and in retrospect I should not have left. I am sick today so I will not be going but I miss them; yes I am going back to church again and it is there. The people at this church are like family to me closer to me than my own family. when I left the church I only had one friend out side the church during this time my mom passed away and my friend moved away -I fell into a deep depression pouring myself into my writing because that was all I had or so it seemed. I guess I am apologizing for all the things I put people through on the site during that time. I am doing better and realize some things I need to do to heal completely so that I can continue to write honestly. I am greatly thankful to the people who have continued to reach out their hands in friendship during that time, they are too many to name. Later I hope to post a copy of this with the notes so that people can have an idea of the melody but for now I am just happy to share this song with you.


(Song)
If I had the chance to fall in love
again;
there'd be so many things that i would do
I would tell you everyday how much i cared
(If I could fall) in love with you

If I had the chance to fall in love
again;
there would be so many things
that I would never do
I would never raise my voice
when disagreements came
If I had the chance for love again

I must admit
that you have hurt me
deeper so much deeper
than any one could do
I also know
that I have hurt you
just as badly too
because i was untrue

If I had the chance to fall in love
again
there would be so many things
that I would do
I'd give all of my heart
right from the start
(if I could fall) in love again
I'd let nothing tear you from my heart
(if I could fall)
If I had a chance to ever fall in love
with you...




I rewrote this song 4 times since the original writing and could not finish it until recently
I would not normally share such personal imfo about myself but i think it was warranted and this is my answer for the untitled poem as well as "The winter of my youth" and numerous other sad or angry poems I have placed on site.


[comments] => 6 [counter] => 162 [topic] => 34 [informant] => Archie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )
If I had the chance to fall in love again

Contributed by Archie on Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 09:18:54 AM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics



Introduction:
I wrote this song shortly before I left the church I was going to. This was a very tough decision for me because I was a member for over 11 years. The fact is that we both made mistakes that hurt each other and in retrospect I should not have left. I am sick today so I will not be going but I miss them; yes I am going back to church again and it is there. The people at this church are like family to me closer to me than my own family. when I left the church I only had one friend out side the church during this time my mom passed away and my friend moved away -I fell into a deep depression pouring myself into my writing because that was all I had or so it seemed. I guess I am apologizing for all the things I put people through on the site during that time. I am doing better and realize some things I need to do to heal completely so that I can continue to write honestly. I am greatly thankful to the people who have continued to reach out their hands in friendship during that time, they are too many to name. Later I hope to post a copy of this with the notes so that people can have an idea of the melody but for now I am just happy to share this song with you.


(Song)
If I had the chance to fall in love
again;
there'd be so many things that i would do
I would tell you everyday how much i cared
(If I could fall) in love with you

If I had the chance to fall in love
again;
there would be so many things
that I would never do
I would never raise my voice
when disagreements came
If I had the chance for love again

I must admit
that you have hurt me
deeper so much deeper
than any one could do
I also know
that I have hurt you
just as badly too
because i was untrue

If I had the chance to fall in love
again
there would be so many things
that I would do
I'd give all of my heart
right from the start
(if I could fall) in love again
I'd let nothing tear you from my heart
(if I could fall)
If I had a chance to ever fall in love
with you...




I rewrote this song 4 times since the original writing and could not finish it until recently
I would not normally share such personal imfo about myself but i think it was warranted and this is my answer for the untitled poem as well as "The winter of my youth" and numerous other sad or angry poems I have placed on site.






Copyright © Archie ... [ 2004-07-18 09:18:54]
(Date/Time posted on site)





Advertisments:






Previous Posted Poem         | |         Next Posted Poem


 
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.
Re: If I had the chance to fall in love again (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 10:07:13 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
A sweet song Archie, and very sad.
And dont worry about it, we all lose people and we all do things we regret later.
Nice song.
Keep writing, Phil


Re: If I had the chance to fall in love again (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 02:32:34 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
awww... so truely moving, thank you for sharing, archie, its so beautifully heartfelt:) hugs n' love nessa

@->>->:-


Re: If I had the chance to fall in love again (User Rating: 1 )
by WinterFawn on Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 02:08:07 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
When we look back on things it is so easy to say "if only"...this is an awesome song full of beautiful emotions.

WinterFawn


Re: If I had the chance to fall in love again (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 09:09:26 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
Very touching piece. Just remember, there is One who is good at giving second chances!
Take care.
Andrew


Re: If I had the chance to fall in love again (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 12:15:35 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
First off, there is no need to apologise.... But I love hearing about ppl's lives so it was welcomed.. I am terribly sorry about your loss and I know how that feels.... The anger, the depression, the pain and all that comes with it.
Now about this song...it is absolutely a hit!! Hope you are feeling a bit better now.
Hugs
Jenni


Re: If I had the chance to fall in love again (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 01:08:19 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
Sad but written well my friend. hind sight is always better than fore sight.
luv, huggs,
emy




While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com