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Array ( [sid] => 56723 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Tortured Soul [time] => 2004-07-19 04:51:27 [hometext] => not much to say on this one, title says it all but i feel my poems have been drying up recently, so please comment and tell me waht you think, Kakashi [bodytext] => I am a tortured soul.

My heart loves someone and it just won’t let go,
She plagues my mind and I try not to let it show,
The sleepless nights I have endured,
Wishing I could find a cure,
Wishing I could be with her once more.

I am a tortured soul.

You see me you can not even manage a 'hi',
All you want to do is get out the door and say a goodbye,
Wishing you didn’t love me,
Wishing your heart could let things be,
So you bounce from one guy to the next,
Saying you have no regrets.

We are tortured souls.

All I want is you in my arms again,
No substitute can make amends,
No other person could feel the void,
I wonder why it makes me feel so annoyed.

I am a tortured soul.

All I want to do is make amends,
To be together once again,
To help each other like we did back when,
We were still together.

I am a tortured soul.
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Tortured Soul

Contributed by lonely_kakashi on Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 04:51:27 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I am a tortured soul.

My heart loves someone and it just won’t let go,
She plagues my mind and I try not to let it show,
The sleepless nights I have endured,
Wishing I could find a cure,
Wishing I could be with her once more.

I am a tortured soul.

You see me you can not even manage a 'hi',
All you want to do is get out the door and say a goodbye,
Wishing you didn’t love me,
Wishing your heart could let things be,
So you bounce from one guy to the next,
Saying you have no regrets.

We are tortured souls.

All I want is you in my arms again,
No substitute can make amends,
No other person could feel the void,
I wonder why it makes me feel so annoyed.

I am a tortured soul.

All I want to do is make amends,
To be together once again,
To help each other like we did back when,
We were still together.

I am a tortured soul.

Copyright Â© lonely_kakashi ... [ 2004-07-19 04:51:27]
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Re: Tortured Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by coldestflame on Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 05:23:38 AM AEST
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hmm.. nice pome.. well besta luk with the gurl.. if u talk ne bit lik u rite, then u musta swept her off her feet by now.. tc, g

Re: Tortured Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by little_genna on Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 01:08:32 PM AEST
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Trefor this is a good poem. Im sorry that your heart will not let go.

im just sorry

Re: Tortured Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by blackholesun on Saturday, 4th September 2004 @ 08:51:57 AM AEST
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sounds painfull,
you can never be happy till you let go,i know
when you break up and get back together it never seems to be the same,
but if you love eachother apart at least the good memories remain,
keep on keepin on friend you will find yor center of peace someday,i pray

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