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Remind me of my life
Feelings of hate
Make me lose faith
You cost my heart lots of pain
I almost went insane
I thought you loved me
But I was a fool
Now you have another jewel
She's such a B*****
I wish you would see
How much she really trys to be like me
We may have not been meant to be
But why did you do this to me
You broke my heart
And I hate that we are apart
Things happen to remind me of us
I wish they would go away just because
Tears come from my eyes
From all your lies
I've lost all control
Please dig my hole
I've given up on love
Because I've lost that flying dove
You can never be trusted
Because I caught you and you were busted
Just sitting here lonely
Taking things slowly
Wishing you would stay out of my mind
Because you are no longer mine [comments] => 4 [counter] => 180 [topic] => 32 [informant] => Tigerpaws [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Heart Pain

Contributed by Tigerpaws on Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 08:18:59 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Dark clouds
Remind me of my life
Feelings of hate
Make me lose faith
You cost my heart lots of pain
I almost went insane
I thought you loved me
But I was a fool
Now you have another jewel
She's such a B*****
I wish you would see
How much she really trys to be like me
We may have not been meant to be
But why did you do this to me
You broke my heart
And I hate that we are apart
Things happen to remind me of us
I wish they would go away just because
Tears come from my eyes
From all your lies
I've lost all control
Please dig my hole
I've given up on love
Because I've lost that flying dove
You can never be trusted
Because I caught you and you were busted
Just sitting here lonely
Taking things slowly
Wishing you would stay out of my mind
Because you are no longer mine

Copyright © Tigerpaws ... [ 2004-07-19 20:18:59]
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Re: Heart Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 08:40:12 PM AEST
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nice!!! this poem is really great. so many good areas-
"Just sitting here lonely
Taking things slowly
Wishing you would stay out of my mind
Because you are no longer mine"
I know this feeling exactly... erie how you nailed it for me.
"Tears come from my eyes
From all your lies
I've lost all control
Please dig my hole
I've given up on love" -- deep, I like these lines also. another great write I will keep and eye out for your new works. A+++++

Re: Heart Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 01:03:46 AM AEST
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wonderful expression of feelings, warm welcome to ypdc:) hugs n' love nessa

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Re: Heart Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by CrimsonTears on Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 01:30:07 PM AEST
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This is an excellent poem...i really liked it...i know how it feels....great job

Lots of Love
CrimsonTears

Re: Heart Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by storm_amoure on Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 07:39:17 PM AEST
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hey, i just wanted to say thanx for responding to my poem, but wow your's is really awesome, you nailed my feelings too. i really have given up on love, it's actually sad i don't believe anything that comes out of a guy's mouth, to me it only means one thing. it's really sad b/c i fear that some day a guy will really mean everything he says, and i'll push him away from all my hate on men. but hopefully someday i'll regain my trust in love. well it's really an awesome poem, i'm going to read some more. lol

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