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Array ( [sid] => 56868 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => dreaming of heaven waking in hell [time] => 2004-07-20 03:26:14 [hometext] => about a dream I had not long ago that has touch me deeply.... please comment [bodytext] => here i stand next to u... not know what comes next but i am happy,
( this can't be real)
we are at a road we have both taken b4... always alone never together.
u hold my hand in your as we start walking,
fearing it all no one is talking...

we realized that we should be together
because our love could last forever,
u hold me so close i feel the warmth of your breath
softly on my skin, it been so long since our lips have met,
my body has longed for your touch,
(no no no...to good to be true)
something is shaking me all over,
i can not help it to see you fade away,
i reach for you screaming for you to stay,
"DON'T LEAVE ME AGAIN....STAY WITH ME STAY"
sit straight up in my bed,
the visions are dancing in my head,
"I NEED U HEAR...WHERE ARE YOU?"
i'm all alone in the bed...
see your picture on the table,
i hold my pillow close to my heart
my tears fall so fast, so many,
how did i dream this when your not hear.
how did i feel you next to me
feel your kiss, feel your arms,
HOW?????????


why??????


when you have been in heaven for over a year?

[comments] => 2 [counter] => 171 [topic] => 14 [informant] => brokenwings [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DreamsandWishes )
dreaming of heaven waking in hell

Contributed by brokenwings on Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 03:26:14 AM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes



here i stand next to u... not know what comes next but i am happy,
( this can't be real)
we are at a road we have both taken b4... always alone never together.
u hold my hand in your as we start walking,
fearing it all no one is talking...

we realized that we should be together
because our love could last forever,
u hold me so close i feel the warmth of your breath
softly on my skin, it been so long since our lips have met,
my body has longed for your touch,
(no no no...to good to be true)
something is shaking me all over,
i can not help it to see you fade away,
i reach for you screaming for you to stay,
"DON'T LEAVE ME AGAIN....STAY WITH ME STAY"
sit straight up in my bed,
the visions are dancing in my head,
"I NEED U HEAR...WHERE ARE YOU?"
i'm all alone in the bed...
see your picture on the table,
i hold my pillow close to my heart
my tears fall so fast, so many,
how did i dream this when your not hear.
how did i feel you next to me
feel your kiss, feel your arms,
HOW?????????


why??????


when you have been in heaven for over a year?





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Re: dreaming of heaven waking in hell (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 04:10:08 AM AEST
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omg, im speechless, i have had this dream as well about my hubby dave who died and it tore me up, i never could write about it, thank you so much for sharing this, it was so real; wow and wow, just thank you! hugs n' love nessa

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Re: dreaming of heaven waking in hell (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 04:46:16 AM AEST
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It is always tough to lose some one the pain never quite goes away, but neither do the memories of love and friendship. I hope you find peace and that a new love will fill your heart with memories of love again.




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