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[aid] => mick
[title] => I Hate You
[time] => 2004-07-20 11:24:01
[hometext] => Another poem written after lats nights fight.........
[bodytext] => You don’t know how much I hate you,
You did something you said you’d never do,
You told me that you didn’t want me anymore,
You pushed me right out of love’s door.
You think I’ll love you always,
You want us to be together for the rest of our days,
You tore out my heart & kicked it around,
You watched me cry & didn’t make a sound.
You will never understand me,
You don’t know what it’s like to not feel free,
You don’t get down or depressed,
You don’t know how it feels to always be stressed.
You know that I need a lot of support,
You know my self esteem is nought,
You don’t seem to care about my feelings,
You don’t want to know when my heads reeling.
You think that depression isn’t really an illness,
You think that it’s nothing to feel worthless,
You don’t love me as much as you claim,
You seem to like to offload all the blame.
You can’t begin to imagine how I feel,
You never witness my heart when it peels,
You choose to ignore my words & acts of plight,
You leave me to cry alone into the night.
You think my tears are unreal & fake,
You think being with me is a big mistake,
You hate the fact that I have depression,
You don’t think that I have learnt any lessons.
You want me to be someone else,
You don’t see the cracks in my mental health,
You can’t see past my pained smiles,
You just sit & stare all the while.
You promised me you’d love me forever,
You said that you turn your back never,
You broke you promise & broke my heart,
You lied to me right from the start.
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[acomm] => 0
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[score] => 16
[ratings] => 4
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => AngryPoetry
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I Hate You
Contributed by
pixie
on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 11:24:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
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You don’t know how much I hate you,
You did something you said you’d never do,
You told me that you didn’t want me anymore,
You pushed me right out of love’s door.
You think I’ll love you always,
You want us to be together for the rest of our days,
You tore out my heart & kicked it around,
You watched me cry & didn’t make a sound.
You will never understand me,
You don’t know what it’s like to not feel free,
You don’t get down or depressed,
You don’t know how it feels to always be stressed.
You know that I need a lot of support,
You know my self esteem is nought,
You don’t seem to care about my feelings,
You don’t want to know when my heads reeling.
You think that depression isn’t really an illness,
You think that it’s nothing to feel worthless,
You don’t love me as much as you claim,
You seem to like to offload all the blame.
You can’t begin to imagine how I feel,
You never witness my heart when it peels,
You choose to ignore my words & acts of plight,
You leave me to cry alone into the night.
You think my tears are unreal & fake,
You think being with me is a big mistake,
You hate the fact that I have depression,
You don’t think that I have learnt any lessons.
You want me to be someone else,
You don’t see the cracks in my mental health,
You can’t see past my pained smiles,
You just sit & stare all the while.
You promised me you’d love me forever,
You said that you turn your back never,
You broke you promise & broke my heart,
You lied to me right from the start.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-07-20 11:24:01]
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Re: I Hate You
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by Tigerpaws on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 11:29:26 AM AEST
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| This is a great poem. you talk about how I feel because I just got my heart broken. |
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Re: I Hate You
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by deathdrop on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 11:36:32 AM AEST
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oh pixie!
i'm sorry tha you are being put through this!
you don't deserve it on little bit.
please never forget that i'm always around for a chat if you want to vent or if you're feeling low.
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Re: I Hate You
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by alecfernadez on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 11:48:04 AM AEST
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| This is a brilliant hate poem, because it does something special and outstanding, In projecting your anger towards whomever the poems about, it creates this angry accusing giant finger in your mind, pointing and shouting, and accusing. You should definatly give this to the person it was written about, because they will seriously feel the anger in this, and will most likely step off you, because this is really strong stuff, stronger than most of the hate and anger poetry I read. Good work |
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Re: I Hate You
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 11:54:12 AM AEST
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awwww!! im so sorry this happened sweetie!! your poem is excellent but i am worried for your heart, when we invest so much into a love and they are not as we believed them to be, ohhh, i well know the feeling! keep writing it out, extra big hugs n' lotsa love nessa
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Re: I Hate You
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by iluvpencils on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 12:25:23 PM AEST
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Wow. Great poem. Thank you. That's a good way to get rid of your anger (or at least, let out some of it, even if it doesn't make all of it go away).
Oh yeah and thanks! I've noticed you've commented on a few of my poems. I'm happy to return the favor. =)
-Claire |
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Re: I Hate You
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by brokensoul on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 01:55:18 PM AEST
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You think that depression isn’t really an illness,
You think that it’s nothing to feel worthless,
i have people say that before and i hate it |
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Re: I Hate You
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 08:59:02 PM AEST
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If he can stand by you while you knowingly have this depression, then your relationship will become all you both seek in life. For now, it has to hurt and I wish only the best for!
Good luck you two! Work it out...it may be worth it!
Angel always...joni |
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Re: I Hate You
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by blueheart on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 10:06:12 PM AEST
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| Oh pixie, I hope you've calmed down now. No one should be treated with disrespect. And I for one, loathe being lied to. Hang in there dear. |
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Re: I Hate You
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 06:01:56 AM AEST
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| Oooh..I am so sorry my dear little pixie..you are facing such a struggle..sweetie.don't be disheartened.. venkat |
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Re: I Hate You
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by Rhei76 on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 11:26:29 AM AEST
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Hey Love,
I'm sorry to read this. I hope things work out to your satisfaction.
I see you are down. I wish I would of been around to hear your cries.
As for this poem, I'm sorry. You have my prayers. I pray for you cuz I know how it feels.
God bless you
with his love and my shallow seething emotions. -It's been a bad 3 months- |
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