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Array ( [sid] => 56898 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Broken Trust [time] => 2004-07-20 11:59:46 [hometext] => All I want is some honest feedback! Thanks! - Sarah May [bodytext] => Broken Trust 7/19/04

Foolish, yes, I’m feelin’ foolish,
Cause I believed that it would last
That your past was still your past.
You wouldn’t betray me like you did to her.
But I was wrong – that’s all I know for sure…

Chorus:
Betrayal is the name of your game,
Lies were the only thing that stayed the same.
Trust is gone forever more.
It’s over now…Gotta pick myself up off the floor.

Sleepless nights are over now.
This crying game is finally through.
Time to move on and to start anew.
You can’t bring me down any more,
It’s time for me to learn to soar…

Chorus:
Betrayal is the name of your game,
Lies were the only thing that stayed the same.
Trust is gone forever more.
It’s over now…Gonna pick myself up off the floor.

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Broken Trust

Contributed by sarah_may on Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 11:59:46 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



Broken Trust 7/19/04

Foolish, yes, I’m feelin’ foolish,
Cause I believed that it would last
That your past was still your past.
You wouldn’t betray me like you did to her.
But I was wrong – that’s all I know for sure…

Chorus:
Betrayal is the name of your game,
Lies were the only thing that stayed the same.
Trust is gone forever more.
It’s over now…Gotta pick myself up off the floor.

Sleepless nights are over now.
This crying game is finally through.
Time to move on and to start anew.
You can’t bring me down any more,
It’s time for me to learn to soar…

Chorus:
Betrayal is the name of your game,
Lies were the only thing that stayed the same.
Trust is gone forever more.
It’s over now…Gonna pick myself up off the floor.





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Re: Broken Trust (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 12:03:10 PM AEST
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awwww I am sorry that this has happened to you hun *hugs you* to be betryaed is not something that I have dealt with in my life, but I can imagine how muhc it hurts, I hope that one day you will be able to find a man who is worthy of your love and care....

takecare,
pixie xx


Re: Broken Trust (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 12:18:48 PM AEST
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I can relate, well written.


Re: Broken Trust (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 12:29:37 PM AEST
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interesting work..I liked it though,Maybe better to hear you sing it though.......


Re: Broken Trust (User Rating: 1 )
by fairietears on Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 12:58:03 PM AEST
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Everyone who has been on the floor themselves know this pain! It will heal. Love yourself always!


Re: Broken Trust (User Rating: 1 )
by Jacoba on Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 01:25:47 PM AEST
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Great song...well, the lyrics anyway...I'm sorry you feel so bad, but time heals all wounds. Very great writing.
Jacoba


Re: Broken Trust (User Rating: 1 )
by freespirit on Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 02:24:07 PM AEST
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Well done but I think you have to make a few changes if you want it to be a song like
betrayal it the game you play
your lies they stay the same
trust is gone for ever more
like that hope you dont mind i said that you may some day be a song wtiter good luck
god bless freespirit




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