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Array ( [sid] => 56922 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => GREATEST THANKS/Největší dík [time] => 2004-07-20 14:55:40 [hometext] => PLEASE PLEASE READ [bodytext] => My dear Friends from YPDC,holding you in High Regard, with tears in my eyes I thank you for all prayers you said for me and my mom. I will never forget about how much you have done for us. My thousands honest thanks to all of you!!! With love, Aika

The blue of her eyes is gone
Lost in far
Lips smiling full of pain
Hopelessness of lost soul

Body lifelessly lying
Being clutched in cramp
Poisons trouble her
And minutes don´t run anywhere

So my Mother lies in here,
And I can not help
Tears filling my eyes
And to God I am turning them

Caresses from friends
Who said their prayers
Like a soft wave strokes
My mother´s soul and hair

Flow, flow our fate
As you are predicted to
We won´t stand against
But patiently will face to you

Oči, z nichž modro vyprchalo,
Ztratilo se do dáli,
Ústa jež usmívají se bolestí
Beznaděj ztracené duše

Tělo, jež bezvládně leží,
svíraje se v křečích,
Jedy jenž jej souží
A minuty, které neplynou

Tak tu leží má matka,
A já nemohu pomoci
Slzy naplňují mé oči
A já je obracím k bohu

Pohlazení přátel,
Jenž modlitbu svou vznesli
Jako vlna hladí
Mé matce duši a vlasy

Pluj, pluj osude
Tak jak jsi předpovězen
Nepůjdeme proti tobě
Ale staneme čelem

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GREATEST THANKSNejvětší dík

Contributed by Aika on Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 02:55:40 PM in AEST
Topic: group

My dear Friends from YPDC,holding you in High Regard, with tears in my eyes I thank you for all prayers you said for me and my mom. I will never forget about how much you have done for us. My thousands honest thanks to all of you!!! With love, Aika

The blue of her eyes is gone
Lost in far
Lips smiling full of pain
Hopelessness of lost soul

Body lifelessly lying
Being clutched in cramp
Poisons trouble her
And minutes don´t run anywhere

So my Mother lies in here,
And I can not help
Tears filling my eyes
And to God I am turning them

Caresses from friends
Who said their prayers
Like a soft wave strokes
My mother´s soul and hair

Flow, flow our fate
As you are predicted to
We won´t stand against
But patiently will face to you

Oči, z nichž modro vyprchalo,
Ztratilo se do dáli,
Ústa jež usmívají se bolestí
Beznaděj ztracené duše

Tělo, jež bezvládně leží,
svíraje se v křečích,
Jedy jenž jej souží
A minuty, které neplynou

Tak tu leží má matka,
A já nemohu pomoci
Slzy naplňují mé oči
A já je obracím k bohu

Pohlazení přátel,
Jenž modlitbu svou vznesli
Jako vlna hladí
Mé matce duši a vlasy

Pluj, pluj osude
Tak jak jsi předpovězen
Nepůjdeme proti tobě
Ale staneme čelem

Copyright Â© Aika ... [ 2004-07-20 14:55:40]
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Re: GREATEST THANKSNejvětší dík (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 03:22:24 PM AEST
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May prayer carry you and your family on a journey. This is such a sad situation, but I find prayer is a pillar of strength when you need it. May your mom be carried by all of our prayers, and you find comfort from them.
Many prayers to you......
Angel always...joni

Re: GREATEST THANKSNejvětší dík (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 05:43:39 PM AEST
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Aika, I am truly sorry to hear of this....You have written such beautiful verses about such a sad situation.
My prayers and thought will be with you and your family just as the YPDC family has been with me in my time of loss....
(((((hugs))))))
Jenni

Re: GREATEST THANKSNejvětší dík (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 06:09:31 PM AEST
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awww sweetie!! my heart goes out to all of you, i am still praying for a miracle.... big big hugs n' love nessa xxxx...

@->>->:-

Re: GREATEST THANKSNejvětší dík (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 09:38:21 PM AEST
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my heart cries for you my friend...i believe you will find the strength to make it through this tough time...have you all in my prayers

Shari

Re: GREATEST THANKSNejvětší dík (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 09:58:31 PM AEST
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It is so difficult to stand by and watch them in such pain and be able to do nothing. I will continue to pray for all of you. My heart and thoughts are with you as I know the hurt you are going through. Blessings to you all.

Rita

Re: GREATEST THANKSNejvětší dík (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 02:11:02 AM AEST
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Oh..very sad..I know how it is hard to see
a mother in such a condition...here I had
my parents with terrible problems..they are
94 and 87..almost immobile..
I pray for your your mother..venkat

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