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Array ( [sid] => 56997 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Heart Bleeds Black Tears. [time] => 2004-07-21 02:06:36 [hometext] => I’m stuck between my best mate and her boy friend.My mate told her boy Friend about Sunday so now her boy friend wants to know what the deal is.I can’t turn my back on him ‘coz he’s my mate.Only my friend doesn’t see it as just.She thinks in goes further [bodytext] => ...Because he’s been ringing me loads, (to check that I’m ok).
It’s such a confusing mess! My friend doesn’t want to know me, and her boy friend wants me to tell her that she's dumped if she can't grow up! her for him because feels that she's being a baby about the whole thing...
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I’m feeling so stuck,
In between you two.
I’m stressed and I’m tired,
And I’m feeling so blue!

You have fallen out.
I’m trying to help you through.
Why can’t you see Zoe?
I’m only trying to help you two!

I’m not cheating on you,
With your boy!
He’s all yours.
I KNOW HE’S NOT MINE!

You won’t talk to him,
And he wants to know what’s going on.
So I’ve told him things.
I’m trying to build you two strong.

You have some thing beautiful.
Don’t wash it down the drain!
He really care’s for you.
But you’re too suck-up to see.

I promise you this,
We’re not cheating on you!
And about him phoning me,
IT’S BECAUSE OF YOU!

So don’t blame me,
For the mistakes YOU’VE made.
And don’t say it’s my fault!
‘Coz I’m not to blame!!!!

If you tell people,
That I went back on the roof,
Then you should expect them,
To phone me not you!

Dan cares about me,
He told me so.
It’s because of YOU he phoned me!
But don’t think he don’t love you!

I didn’t ask you to phone him!
I didn’t want him to know.
But you went behind my back,
I don’t know why I was still friends with you!

So now he has rung me,
To ask what’s going on.
He told me he’s here for me!
And he don’t want know you if you’ll be a selfish ****!

Those weren’t my words,
They were his!
But I think the same,
‘Coz you’re pushing me through ****!

You’re accusing us,
Of cheating on you!
But we’re not!
… And that’s the truth.

But Dan’s been trying,
To call you.
But for some reason.
You won’t answer you’re phone!

So Dan has asked me,
To tell you to grow up.
Because if you don’t,
Then you ARE dumped…

But how can I tell you that?
How can I not?
It’s only the truth.
But I don’t want it to be my job…

We’re meant to be best mates,
Let nothing keep us apart.
I know Dan is yours!
… But you're bleeding darkness into my heart…
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My Heart Bleeds Black Tears.

Contributed by deathdrop on Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 02:06:36 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



...Because he’s been ringing me loads, (to check that I’m ok).
It’s such a confusing mess! My friend doesn’t want to know me, and her boy friend wants me to tell her that she's dumped if she can't grow up! her for him because feels that she's being a baby about the whole thing...
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I’m feeling so stuck,
In between you two.
I’m stressed and I’m tired,
And I’m feeling so blue!

You have fallen out.
I’m trying to help you through.
Why can’t you see Zoe?
I’m only trying to help you two!

I’m not cheating on you,
With your boy!
He’s all yours.
I KNOW HE’S NOT MINE!

You won’t talk to him,
And he wants to know what’s going on.
So I’ve told him things.
I’m trying to build you two strong.

You have some thing beautiful.
Don’t wash it down the drain!
He really care’s for you.
But you’re too suck-up to see.

I promise you this,
We’re not cheating on you!
And about him phoning me,
IT’S BECAUSE OF YOU!

So don’t blame me,
For the mistakes YOU’VE made.
And don’t say it’s my fault!
‘Coz I’m not to blame!!!!

If you tell people,
That I went back on the roof,
Then you should expect them,
To phone me not you!

Dan cares about me,
He told me so.
It’s because of YOU he phoned me!
But don’t think he don’t love you!

I didn’t ask you to phone him!
I didn’t want him to know.
But you went behind my back,
I don’t know why I was still friends with you!

So now he has rung me,
To ask what’s going on.
He told me he’s here for me!
And he don’t want know you if you’ll be a selfish ****!

Those weren’t my words,
They were his!
But I think the same,
‘Coz you’re pushing me through ****!

You’re accusing us,
Of cheating on you!
But we’re not!
… And that’s the truth.

But Dan’s been trying,
To call you.
But for some reason.
You won’t answer you’re phone!

So Dan has asked me,
To tell you to grow up.
Because if you don’t,
Then you ARE dumped…

But how can I tell you that?
How can I not?
It’s only the truth.
But I don’t want it to be my job…

We’re meant to be best mates,
Let nothing keep us apart.
I know Dan is yours!
… But you're bleeding darkness into my heart…




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Re: My Heart Bleeds Black Tears. (User Rating: 1 )
by flamingblade on Sunday, 9th September 2007 @ 10:50:17 AM AEST
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oh my
i can't relate
and that's wierd, for me
but i think you did good anyway
so kepp venting, i guess
Flamingblade




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