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Array ( [sid] => 57057 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => All my Fault [time] => 2004-07-21 13:49:55 [hometext] => nufin 2 say reli!! jus rte it in m gardn wen m parents threw m out 4 a cuple ov ours!!! My dad aint reli ded but e nearly died!! [bodytext] => They always row,
i know its my fault,
thats what SHE tells me,
thats why i feel horrible,
thats why i cant live,
I dont want to live,
Its my fault he went there,
To that horrible place,
I dont deserve to live,
One slit on each wrist and i'm done,
one cut to the throat and im gone.
Good luck to the life that i once had,
Good luck to the family that i never had,
Goodbye to the mum,
who had never loved me,
Hello to the man,
who i sent here,
to heaven,
my dad. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 221 [topic] => 36 [informant] => Beni [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

All my Fault

Contributed by Beni on Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 01:49:55 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

They always row,
i know its my fault,
thats what SHE tells me,
thats why i feel horrible,
thats why i cant live,
I dont want to live,
Its my fault he went there,
To that horrible place,
I dont deserve to live,
One slit on each wrist and i'm done,
one cut to the throat and im gone.
Good luck to the life that i once had,
Good luck to the family that i never had,
Goodbye to the mum,
who had never loved me,
Hello to the man,
who i sent here,
to heaven,
my dad.

Copyright © Beni ... [ 2004-07-21 13:49:55]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: All my Fault (User Rating: 1 )
by Babigurl on Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 02:14:45 PM AEST
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I hope you are not plannign to do anything to yourself its a good poem keep it up

Re: All my Fault (User Rating: 1 )
by Stoney1 on Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 02:19:26 PM AEST
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Well...the preamble is right out of Orwellian Newspeak, but the poem
observes conventional spelling and isn't half bad.

I was going to suggest seeing a priest, and that you'd probably be
alright as long as you kept him on his side of the confessional screen.

But then I managed to decipher the preamble and saw that it's just a
typical teenage rant against 'tyrannical' parents.*g*

Stoney

Re: All my Fault (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 03:06:20 PM AEST
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pouring out emotion is so much better than pouring out blood, least you'll live to write more good poetry keep 'em coming!

wildejohnny.

Re: All my Fault (User Rating: 1 )
by xemptydecemberx on Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 04:10:33 PM AEST
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definitly a good poem. keep em coming

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