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Array ( [sid] => 5708 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Sometimes [time] => 2002-10-27 13:30:00 [hometext] => Sometimes I think..... [bodytext] => Sometimes I think I like the world
other times I think I don't
One day I'll feel like getting up
the next day I simply won't
Sometimes I think of days gone by
other times I think of now
sometimes I think of things to come
sometimes I wonder how
Sometimes I think the past was better
when life was simple and less complicated
sometimes I wish I'd went that way
other times I wish I'd waited
Sometimes I miss the way things were
Other times I just don't care
I long for things unchanging
Somethings I just can't bear
Somedays make me wonder
just what the future holds
It's those days I dread
the uncertainty that unfolds
Sometimes I really think the world
will somehow be alright
Other times I lie awake and worry
and toss and turn all night [comments] => 5 [counter] => 200 [topic] => 25 [informant] => Brenda [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )

Sometimes

Contributed by Brenda on Sunday, 27th October 2002 @ 01:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

Sometimes I think I like the world
other times I think I don't
One day I'll feel like getting up
the next day I simply won't
Sometimes I think of days gone by
other times I think of now
sometimes I think of things to come
sometimes I wonder how
Sometimes I think the past was better
when life was simple and less complicated
sometimes I wish I'd went that way
other times I wish I'd waited
Sometimes I miss the way things were
Other times I just don't care
I long for things unchanging
Somethings I just can't bear
Somedays make me wonder
just what the future holds
It's those days I dread
the uncertainty that unfolds
Sometimes I really think the world
will somehow be alright
Other times I lie awake and worry
and toss and turn all night

Copyright © Brenda ... [ 2002-10-27 13:30:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Sometimes (User Rating: 1 )
by ginsdance on Sunday, 27th October 2002 @ 01:38:27 PM AEST
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Hey, we only worry about things, and think on days that end in "y" right??? ;)

Great write!!!

Ginnie

Re: Sometimes (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Sunday, 27th October 2002 @ 01:38:50 PM AEST
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WELL SAID! I'M SURE A LOT OF US FEEL THIS WAY! GREAT RIGHT.CHRISTINA

Re: Sometimes (User Rating: 1 )
by norticus on Sunday, 27th October 2002 @ 01:40:27 PM AEST
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Yeah. You hit it with this one. I'm giving it a 5 on the Nortiscale. It had a good tempo, nice English and heavy on truth. You're talented.

Re: Sometimes (User Rating: 1 )
by Ronald on Sunday, 27th October 2002 @ 03:11:38 PM AEST
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Hey, Crissy Lee. Ronald from Malaysia here again. Love to read your latest poem here. What you've written is really very true for us human. Overall : 5/5

Re: Sometimes (User Rating: 1 )
by Ronald on Sunday, 27th October 2002 @ 03:15:03 PM AEST
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Oppss..! Sorry, you're not Crissy.... Sorry got mistaken because was reading her poem before reading yours. Brenda, your poem is great!

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