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Array ( [sid] => 57131 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Stranger [time] => 2004-07-22 05:49:33 [hometext] => i wrote it in english so it's not very creative [bodytext] => Hello Stranger, I see you speak,
I hope you don’t mind, if I peak.
Over here stranger, say my name,
Stranger please, play my game.
Look at me stranger, it’s my first day,
Just come on over and say “Hey”.
Well done stranger, that’s good work,
But why to me, do you still smirk.
Warm stranger, I know you have friends,
But a list of friends never ends.
Stop laughing stranger, are they pointing at me?
They’re just looking and smiling with glee.
Good luck stranger, it’s your turn to talk,
You can do it, “walk the walk”.
Pick me stranger, for your team,
It may be small, but it’s what I dream.
Hello stranger, I’m over here,
In the corner where it’s clear.
Goodbye stranger, I’m giving up now,
Why did you bother? Not to see how.

[comments] => 4 [counter] => 146 [topic] => 43 [informant] => LoserLottie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Stranger

Contributed by LoserLottie on Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 05:49:33 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

Hello Stranger, I see you speak,
I hope you don’t mind, if I peak.
Over here stranger, say my name,
Stranger please, play my game.
Look at me stranger, it’s my first day,
Just come on over and say “Hey”.
Well done stranger, that’s good work,
But why to me, do you still smirk.
Warm stranger, I know you have friends,
But a list of friends never ends.
Stop laughing stranger, are they pointing at me?
They’re just looking and smiling with glee.
Good luck stranger, it’s your turn to talk,
You can do it, “walk the walk”.
Pick me stranger, for your team,
It may be small, but it’s what I dream.
Hello stranger, I’m over here,
In the corner where it’s clear.
Goodbye stranger, I’m giving up now,
Why did you bother? Not to see how.

Copyright Â© LoserLottie ... [ 2004-07-22 05:49:33]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Stranger (User Rating: 1 )
by AspenGlow on Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 06:08:15 AM AEST
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I like your poetry, you have flair, and a nice way of putting things, makes me smile. Stick around now and join the croud. This is the best site I've found to linger and read.

Thank you for sharing.

Re: Stranger (User Rating: 1 )
by Beni on Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 06:23:42 AM AEST
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well done in writing this poem. i found it interesting the way you kept saying stranger. by doing this you caught my attention and made me want to read on!!

Re: Stranger (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 10:08:44 AM AEST
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Seems we meet all kind of stangers......SOme all kind and some mean. But the best are the ones who stick with you forever, no matter what happens. Keep, writing, you are talented!

Re: Stranger (User Rating: 1 )
by essab88 on Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 04:12:04 PM AEST
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great job, your poem is very nicely put. its really good. your really good lol. keep writen!

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