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Your Little Whore
Contributed by
RhythmBndt
on
Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 12:17:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I'm a virgin
I'm a whore
I'm a slut
Where do I fit in ?
I don't know
Help me find my place
I'm your little whore
I'm your little slut
I have no sense of self respect
All I ever do is for you
As long as you're happy I don't care
I live for pleasuring you
Make me scream
Make me cry
Make me squirm
With anticipation
I can never say no
Especially to you
I'm your little whore
& I like it that way
You know what to say
You know what to do
How I love you so
Take me frail
Leave me broken
If I didn't love you so much
I wouldn't do this for you
I love you
Copyright ©
RhythmBndt
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2004-07-23 12:17:55]
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Re: Your Little Whore
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by _Raspberry_ on
Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 12:22:02 PM AEST
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| Very good write. Reminds me of this guy who used to call me his "little porn star". Kind of creepy poem really, at least to me. Still an awesome write |
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Re: Your Little Whore
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 12:26:36 PM AEST
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That's not love. It's a disgusting lack of self-respect. I hope this is not your real take on love. The poem is fairly good, the content is unsettling. Just my personal opinion.
Rita |
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Re: Your Little Whore
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by afterdark on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 12:06:12 PM AEST
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| Harsh but also very erotic |
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Re: Your Little Whore
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by lovespoetic0518 on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 09:00:32 AM AEST
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Interesting. You must really be in love. Excellent write.
Kimberly :) |
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