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Array ( [sid] => 57390 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Thanks to you,... [time] => 2004-07-24 09:09:05 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Im all alone now,all black inside
and i want to die.. but you wont let me
you'd never know now,that my feelings
are because of you
thanks to the things you do..
maybe i wasnt good enough
maybe you never cared..
even though my feelings i shared,the pain i bared
and you never cared?
the possible outcome is that ill use a blade
to forget the shame,erase the pain
and waist away for another day
the possible outcome is that youll come back
and ill take you back
but how do i know you wont you wont hurt my like that
again..
if you have to leave,leave
just stop doing this to me..
because i know i still love you..
but if you loved me too,
why would you hurt me like you do? [comments] => 2 [counter] => 184 [topic] => 48 [informant] => xlooseroftomorrowx [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Thanks to you,...

Contributed by xlooseroftomorrowx on Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 09:09:05 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Im all alone now,all black inside
and i want to die.. but you wont let me
you'd never know now,that my feelings
are because of you
thanks to the things you do..
maybe i wasnt good enough
maybe you never cared..
even though my feelings i shared,the pain i bared
and you never cared?
the possible outcome is that ill use a blade
to forget the shame,erase the pain
and waist away for another day
the possible outcome is that youll come back
and ill take you back
but how do i know you wont you wont hurt my like that
again..
if you have to leave,leave
just stop doing this to me..
because i know i still love you..
but if you loved me too,
why would you hurt me like you do?

Copyright © xlooseroftomorrowx ... [ 2004-07-24 09:09:05]
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Re: Thanks to you,... (User Rating: 1 )
by grip-wth-broken-fingers on Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 09:18:19 AM AEST
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i can relate to this one its a good poem but i think u need to use a more wider range of words not bein like citisysing or anything but some words could make it even better thank you for putting ur emotions into its excellent xgripx

Re: Thanks to you,... (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 10:21:21 AM AEST
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very emotional write,

pixie xx

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