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Array ( [sid] => 57584 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Vanilla Sky [time] => 2004-07-26 02:12:04 [hometext] => I dont know about this one had abit of inspiration with it through [bodytext] => The truth hurts me more than a lie,
You don’t really care cos your just another guy,
I’ve stopped what I’m doing, standing to think,
Back to the darkness I’m starting to sink,

Why couldnt you lie just to make me feel okay,
or standed there not knowing what to say,
But now it's out, the pain's too easy to see,
That beautiful girls no longer me,

The imperfections are shining through,
but all you did was say it's true,
shattered to oblivion, can't put the pieces back,
don't worry it was only a matter time before i began to crack,

Now who's the deserted one, you left me out to rot,
You said you'd come back to save me, but eventally forgot,
I didn't see you made it clear, perfect was nothing but a dream,
What I see and what you see and nothing what they seem,

I've turned it on you, I'm just a little *****,
Never worry now, I'll be gone without a hitch,
A gun's too easy, the knifes an easy way out,
the fall's my choice without a doubt,

I look to the world with tears in my eyes,
tell you all my final good byes,
and say these words before i die,
and leap into the vanilla sky,

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Vanilla Sky

Contributed by corrupted_minds on Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 02:12:04 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

The truth hurts me more than a lie,
You don’t really care cos your just another guy,
I’ve stopped what I’m doing, standing to think,
Back to the darkness I’m starting to sink,

Why couldnt you lie just to make me feel okay,
or standed there not knowing what to say,
But now it's out, the pain's too easy to see,
That beautiful girls no longer me,

The imperfections are shining through,
but all you did was say it's true,
shattered to oblivion, can't put the pieces back,
don't worry it was only a matter time before i began to crack,

Now who's the deserted one, you left me out to rot,
You said you'd come back to save me, but eventally forgot,
I didn't see you made it clear, perfect was nothing but a dream,
What I see and what you see and nothing what they seem,

I've turned it on you, I'm just a little *****,
Never worry now, I'll be gone without a hitch,
A gun's too easy, the knifes an easy way out,
the fall's my choice without a doubt,

I look to the world with tears in my eyes,
tell you all my final good byes,
and say these words before i die,
and leap into the vanilla sky,

Copyright Â© corrupted_minds ... [ 2004-07-26 02:12:04]
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Re: Vanilla Sky (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 05:45:25 AM AEST
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Intensively deep and very, very powerful.
i'm supprised no one else has commented on it!
the rhyme is beautifully done as well.
i hope that you're not planning to do this though.
my boy friend over-dosed yesterday.
he's lived but, he's really scarred me.
i've been wanting to die for ages and keep on being placed under Mental Health Act because of it. he said that he'll be here for me, and i promised not to harm my-self or try to kill my-self for him, as i couldn't do it for myself.
then he tried to kill him-self yesterday.
i feel so low!
... what i'm trying to say is DON'T DO IT!

Re: Vanilla Sky (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 01:46:08 PM AEST
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beautifully moving..... hugs n' love nessa

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Re: Vanilla Sky (User Rating: 1 )
by Kevin on Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 10:19:59 PM AEST
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That was absolutely beautiful, i really and truely loved it, think about what you're doing, i know what its like, but there's always atleast one person worth living for.

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