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[aid] => mick
[title] => the land that they forgot
[time] => 2004-07-26 16:30:46
[hometext] => have you ever thought,id never forget,and then forgot what you were ment to remember?well,this is exactly like this!
[bodytext] => past the old bridge the rickety old women stands a stream clear as crystal its bottom so deep yet,when one steps further you seem to be able to walk on water after the stream there is a ever green forest the trees sway in the light breeze and lap up the sunshine the woodland elves seem to sprint through the grass they whisper excitedly as you approach 'the land' you come to an opening and the elves surround the seven trees in the middle seperate and there is a knobely door you take the key out and twist in inside the door handle it clicks and the door swings open the elves gasp the light shines out and from inside the door a whole world is visible the green lucious hills roam free making the land look so beautiful the bushes shine ever so bright,not green purple the streams rush and the smell is mint fresh and clean the birds sing sweetly and the flowers never die there is no people here except:elves,pixies,nymphs,giants,little people,water fairys,good witches,knomes,wizards,mermaids,unicorns and other magical folk,found deep in 'the land' the elves applase as you step inside and the door closes you look back and the door has vanished you dont care though your here! you run over to your favourite bench and all your memories come flooding back your childhood rushes in your mind and you smile and you remember your first glimps of the world was of a beautiful women it wasnt your mother though like an angel but she slowly disappears and you cry you want her back but you are lifted into warm arms and you forget her instantly as your swinging on the ropes of time you remember your old den your water fights with the mermaids and your first crush was on hamforthe the merman you laugh and smile your in utter bliss heaven nearly but you know you cant stay forever and you bid goodbye to your old time friends you walk back to the highest mountain and he politely bids you goodbye you kiss the beautiful green grass and the whole land blushes you smile and you take out the key the door appears and you open it it clicks and you step through the door disappears and your standing in a forest clearing trees surrounding this odd strench of land you blink puzzled why am i here? ive forgotton... you turn and walk away for the last time you bid 'the land they forgot.....an eternal farewell....' [comments] => 1 [counter] => 180 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Hannah_Heaven [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
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