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Array ( [sid] => 57827 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => SUN'S LIGHT SHADOWS [time] => 2004-07-27 21:44:53 [hometext] => On days when the sun is hiding behind the clouds, and everything outside seems dismal and dreary, I make my own sun shine on my computer, in the form of beautiful sunsets I love so much! [bodytext] => "SUN'S LIGHT SHADOWS"



Lingering twilight, at eventide.....
Explosive blasts--fireplace ring side.
Igniting light shadows of clouds,
Singeing surface waters--watchful ship crowds!



Sun's etching pencil sketches lone Chapel.....
Light's rays cast shadows of image angle.
Near by mountain painted with fiery torches.
Chapel eyes watch, fearing demolished ashes.



Pure gold paint covers hard cold steel.....
Echoes of happy children's joy and laughter aver.
Placing value on the Ferris Wheel Ride.
Brilliant treasure, masterpiece of a Joyride!



A city prepares to sleep, fires extinquished......
Bright embers and hot coals cool, 'tis finished.
Strings of lights replace the hot canvas scene.
Tranquility settles in with quietude most serene.



Rewards for enduring heat at day's close.....
Bouquets of pink roses painted beauty bestows.
Cooling palms sway their "good-byes" with a breeze.
Sun's easel tucked at earth's edge with ease.



Sun's light casts shadows behind lonely hills.....
Enticing suspension bridges, man's magnificent skills.
Colored waters glow in the nearby harbor,
Encouraging small boat owners to worship at Fisherman's Altar.



Dark paintings of the sun's missing light of morass......
Street lamps stand guard relighting dark crevasse.
Mourning for missing colors in the radiant rainbows
Highlights with blacks and grays, slight day-glows.



Tall, stationary steeple's audience watches carefully......
Light shadows appear behind silver lining clouds beauty
Motionless, stands in awe observing sun's creativity.
Silvers, bronze, gold, copper, lead, changing calmly.



Sun's artistry, painting sunsets for trillions of a year.....
Professional, leaving each stroke perfectly clear.
Same audience gazes as it finishes it's final touch endear.
All the suns, moons, stars and angels applaud with a joyful cheer!
"Well Done!"

Created by
Lovingcritters
ConSue
July 26, 2004
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
"After a day of cloud and wind and rain.
Sometimes the setting sun breaks out again.
And touches all the darksome woods with light.
Smiles on the fields until they laugh and sing.
Then like a ruby from the horizon's ring.
Drops down into the night
~Henry Wadsworth Longfellow~

*Artistic Smiles*
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SUN'S LIGHT SHADOWS

Contributed by lovingcritters on Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 09:44:53 PM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems



"SUN'S LIGHT SHADOWS"



Lingering twilight, at eventide.....
Explosive blasts--fireplace ring side.
Igniting light shadows of clouds,
Singeing surface waters--watchful ship crowds!



Sun's etching pencil sketches lone Chapel.....
Light's rays cast shadows of image angle.
Near by mountain painted with fiery torches.
Chapel eyes watch, fearing demolished ashes.



Pure gold paint covers hard cold steel.....
Echoes of happy children's joy and laughter aver.
Placing value on the Ferris Wheel Ride.
Brilliant treasure, masterpiece of a Joyride!



A city prepares to sleep, fires extinquished......
Bright embers and hot coals cool, 'tis finished.
Strings of lights replace the hot canvas scene.
Tranquility settles in with quietude most serene.



Rewards for enduring heat at day's close.....
Bouquets of pink roses painted beauty bestows.
Cooling palms sway their "good-byes" with a breeze.
Sun's easel tucked at earth's edge with ease.



Sun's light casts shadows behind lonely hills.....
Enticing suspension bridges, man's magnificent skills.
Colored waters glow in the nearby harbor,
Encouraging small boat owners to worship at Fisherman's Altar.



Dark paintings of the sun's missing light of morass......
Street lamps stand guard relighting dark crevasse.
Mourning for missing colors in the radiant rainbows
Highlights with blacks and grays, slight day-glows.



Tall, stationary steeple's audience watches carefully......
Light shadows appear behind silver lining clouds beauty
Motionless, stands in awe observing sun's creativity.
Silvers, bronze, gold, copper, lead, changing calmly.



Sun's artistry, painting sunsets for trillions of a year.....
Professional, leaving each stroke perfectly clear.
Same audience gazes as it finishes it's final touch endear.
All the suns, moons, stars and angels applaud with a joyful cheer!
"Well Done!"

Created by
Lovingcritters
ConSue
July 26, 2004
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
"After a day of cloud and wind and rain.
Sometimes the setting sun breaks out again.
And touches all the darksome woods with light.
Smiles on the fields until they laugh and sing.
Then like a ruby from the horizon's ring.
Drops down into the night
~Henry Wadsworth Longfellow~

*Artistic Smiles*




Copyright © lovingcritters ... [ 2004-07-27 21:44:53]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: SUN'S LIGHT SHADOWS (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 09:54:48 PM AEST
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my favorite sight a sunset over the water


Shari


Re: SUN'S LIGHT SHADOWS (User Rating: 1 )
by theMoth on Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 10:01:57 PM AEST
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All it needs is a picture of baby Godzilla. Awwww... baby Godzilla.... --the Moth


Re: SUN'S LIGHT SHADOWS (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 10:14:05 PM AEST
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Stunning graphics. Beautiful write, Connie. The only thing that could make it better is to see God's face smiling down on us.


Re: SUN'S LIGHT SHADOWS (User Rating: 1 )
by Gentledove on Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 10:52:35 PM AEST
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A beautiful write from a beautiful soul. The pictures are great also.
Gentledove


Re: SUN'S LIGHT SHADOWS (User Rating: 1 )
by katyqueen35 on Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 12:00:54 AM AEST
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I am in awww...
Beautiful poem well done.......


Re: SUN'S LIGHT SHADOWS (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 04:15:53 AM AEST
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Wow..how beautifully breath taking photos and excellent poems..long live my dear lady!
venkat


Re: SUN'S LIGHT SHADOWS (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 04:59:11 AM AEST
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Awesome, mom!
luv your brat,
emy


Re: SUN'S LIGHT SHADOWS (User Rating: 1 )
by AspenGlow on Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 05:01:49 AM AEST
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Beautiful complete dreams.

Thank you for sharing.


Re: SUN'S LIGHT SHADOWS (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 05:35:14 AM AEST
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wow, such beautiful images and a beautiful poem to go with them...

pixie xx


Re: SUN'S LIGHT SHADOWS (User Rating: 1 )
by Baronhawk on Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 05:35:42 AM AEST
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Such wonderful pictures and more wonderful imagery to describe one of God's wonders upon this earth. As always a beautiful work by a skillful poetess. Some words from the late John Denver would perhaps be appropriate...' sunshine on my shoulders make me happy.....sunshine in my eyes can make me cry.......' ha ha ha oh well...


Re: SUN'S LIGHT SHADOWS (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 07:44:34 PM AEST
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absolutely gorgeous:) hugs n' love nessa

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