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Array ( [sid] => 57839 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Admitting Defeat [time] => 2004-07-28 00:23:50 [hometext] => Typical girl meets boy, girl likes boy, boy chooses another girl. [bodytext] => I’ve admitted defeat
And I’ll try to move on
I’ve wracked my brain
For what I’ve done wrong
You’ve chosen another girl
I still don’t know why
I thought we were right
Of one soul, one heart, one mind

It’s not very often
That I’ll let someone in
Unwilling to love
My heart had always been
You made me break my own rules
And you’ve made me insane
Who knew the heartless wonder
Could feel this much pain

I’ll meet someone else
But to my heart I won’t be true
Because I know that for me
It will always be you [comments] => 3 [counter] => 177 [topic] => 22 [informant] => srsuckow [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Admitting Defeat

Contributed by srsuckow on Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 12:23:50 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I’ve admitted defeat
And I’ll try to move on
I’ve wracked my brain
For what I’ve done wrong
You’ve chosen another girl
I still don’t know why
I thought we were right
Of one soul, one heart, one mind

It’s not very often
That I’ll let someone in
Unwilling to love
My heart had always been
You made me break my own rules
And you’ve made me insane
Who knew the heartless wonder
Could feel this much pain

I’ll meet someone else
But to my heart I won’t be true
Because I know that for me
It will always be you

Copyright Â© srsuckow ... [ 2004-07-28 00:23:50]
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Re: Admitting Defeat (User Rating: 1 )
by 61grahamj on Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 03:06:03 AM AEST
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you have expressed with great feeling one of lifes bitter lessons but as you have said life must go on. great poem
best wishes
61grahamj

Re: Admitting Defeat (User Rating: 1 )
by jenny21614 on Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 03:40:41 PM AEST
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I love this poem. Every single person on this earth can understand the pain you felt at that moment in your life. Hopefully you've moved on by now:) don't worry, everything happens for a reason, and even though it might have felt right at the time, it obviously wasn't, and that can only mean you have bigger and better things waiting for you!
*JeN*

Re: Admitting Defeat (User Rating: 1 )
by CrimsonTears on Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 04:46:54 PM AEST
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I know how you feel....i know how badly it sux to feel this way....this is an excellent poem tho....great work

Lots of Love
CrimsonTears

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