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Ashamed of what we did, I cried,
Young, drunk and restless, you led,
All the way right to the bed,
A blurred memory of that dark night,
I look to the mirror scared of the sight,
Now rumors are spread, secrets no more,
They all knew now but nobody saw,
I was used and abused scared by the fact,
Just to say no was what I lacked,
Now the past still scares me through,
Scared with the tainted thoughts of you
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Young, Drunk and Restless

Contributed by corrupted_minds on Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 06:53:30 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Scars don’t heal they simply hide,
Ashamed of what we did, I cried,
Young, drunk and restless, you led,
All the way right to the bed,
A blurred memory of that dark night,
I look to the mirror scared of the sight,
Now rumors are spread, secrets no more,
They all knew now but nobody saw,
I was used and abused scared by the fact,
Just to say no was what I lacked,
Now the past still scares me through,
Scared with the tainted thoughts of you

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Re: Young, Drunk and Restless (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 06:55:39 AM AEST
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Ohhh I am sorry that this happened , you poem screams pain and fear, the past is very scary, but in time you will learn to not be afriad anymore, takecare
pixie xx

Re: Young, Drunk and Restless (User Rating: 1 )
by Dizza_13 on Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 06:59:10 AM AEST
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Everything you write seems
to be so great! How do you
do it? They always are really
touching. ANother great write loz.

Dizza
xoxoxoxoxo

Re: Young, Drunk and Restless (User Rating: 1 )
by cj_ranson on Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 04:34:26 AM AEST
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wow!! pretty damn good

how do you do it???

Cj xoxoxox

Re: Young, Drunk and Restless (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 12:42:34 PM AEST
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you have amazing skill!
this one is so heart-wrenching. it brought tears to my eyes.

Re: Young, Drunk and Restless (User Rating: 1 )
by Catalina on Sunday, 21st September 2008 @ 01:55:38 PM AEST
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Powerful write! . I loved it! Thankx 4 sharing!

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