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[sid] => 57950
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => Darkness
[time] => 2004-07-28 16:34:28
[hometext] => wrote this a few months ago, it was one of my 1st attempts @ adding a lotta depth and symbolism, enjoy! - i appreciate any feedback on this and all of my poems, thank you so much!
[bodytext] => It’s almost gone But it’s not yet a tragedy Just wait awhile And then you will see The tragedy comes at dawn We’ve had a nice long run But the end is soon Enjoy the time Cause its almost done It’s almost gone Just wait and see The tragedy comes at dawn I liked the black The gray was nice But with what’s coming next I don’t like this track It’s almost gone Just wait and see The tragedy comes at dawn I wish it didn’t happen I wish it could all stop You see a boy before you But soon you’ll see the men It’s almost gone Just wait and see The tragedy comes at dawn Soon I will see your face But I don’t need to know that I only need to know The feeling of your embrace It’s almost gone Just wait and see The tragedy comes at dawn So I find myself petrified When it gets here- Will you be gone? I don’t want to be denied It’s almost gone Just wait and see The tragedy comes at dawn I don’t want you to leave me But you have no obligations I guess when it comes From me you will be free It’s almost here But I don’t understand Why nature must always interfere [comments] => 2 [counter] => 168 [topic] => 22 [informant] => stubbo87 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
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