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Array ( [sid] => 57982 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Hole You Put Me In [time] => 2004-07-28 22:15:37 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I spend every aching day in this dark hole,
This dark hole you put me in,
I try to crawl out...
But you keep pushing me back down,
Why are you ***** doing this to me!

My fingers are bloody,
My nails are gone,
They hurt so bad....
From trying to get out of this hole,
My whole body aches,
Im withering away,
I finally learned to just give up,
I cant believe you betrayed me!
your such a dirty ***hole!!!

Now instead of crying tears,
I cry my own blood,
I told you I was giving up,
Now I am riping away my flesh,
My blood spills everywhere

Heres your ***** feast you bastard! [comments] => 3 [counter] => 178 [topic] => 13 [informant] => xRotten_Insidex [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

The Hole You Put Me In

Contributed by xRotten_Insidex on Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 10:15:37 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I spend every aching day in this dark hole,
This dark hole you put me in,
I try to crawl out...
But you keep pushing me back down,
Why are you ***** doing this to me!

My fingers are bloody,
My nails are gone,
They hurt so bad....
From trying to get out of this hole,
My whole body aches,
Im withering away,
I finally learned to just give up,
I cant believe you betrayed me!
your such a dirty ***hole!!!

Now instead of crying tears,
I cry my own blood,
I told you I was giving up,
Now I am riping away my flesh,
My blood spills everywhere

Heres your ***** feast you bastard!

Copyright © xRotten_Insidex ... [ 2004-07-28 22:15:37]
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Re: The Hole You Put Me In (User Rating: 1 )
by waos on Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 10:25:55 PM AEST
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that's a lot of anger towards people. you sure voiced it openly. good job.

Re: The Hole You Put Me In (User Rating: 1 )
by lovespoetic0518 on Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 08:24:17 AM AEST
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A little scary.......but very intense and very well thought out. I hope alot of this anger is released with the help of writing. Take care.

Kimberly :)

Re: The Hole You Put Me In (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 10:11:26 AM AEST
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Hardcore, Harsh, vivid and to the point, very well written,

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