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Array ( [sid] => 58105 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => No Trust In You [time] => 2004-07-29 19:52:50 [hometext] => This is the first poem i wrote on here :yipee!: This never actually happened to me but for some it has... i just put myself in that position. hope you like it. [bodytext] => No Trust In You

I was so happy when I found you
You were my love, my protector
I never had to worry
About you seeing another her

But when I wasn't with you
I had no clue
What you were doing
I didn't know if you were staying true

I really thought I loved you
But now i'm not too sure
I never knew if you were satisfied
Or if you wanted more

Maybe you did love me
Or maybe you didn't
Actions might have been acting
Words weren't meant

You let me believe
You’d protect me from harm
When I was cold
You’d keep me warm

But my trust
Starting fading
And you
Started playing


I didn't know
What to do
I didn't know
What you were up to

I once heard some rumors
About you and this girl
Kissing her lips
Telling her she was your world

I can’t ask you
Because I melt when you hold me
Even though when I look in your eyes
A player I see

I don't want to get hurt
But I can’t love you
I can’t pretend
I don't know the truth

So go with her
And leave me
I’m stronger
Than I ever thought I’d be.
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 205 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Xxluckie_lynnxX [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
No Trust In You

Contributed by Xxluckie_lynnxX on Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 07:52:50 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



No Trust In You

I was so happy when I found you
You were my love, my protector
I never had to worry
About you seeing another her

But when I wasn't with you
I had no clue
What you were doing
I didn't know if you were staying true

I really thought I loved you
But now i'm not too sure
I never knew if you were satisfied
Or if you wanted more

Maybe you did love me
Or maybe you didn't
Actions might have been acting
Words weren't meant

You let me believe
You’d protect me from harm
When I was cold
You’d keep me warm

But my trust
Starting fading
And you
Started playing


I didn't know
What to do
I didn't know
What you were up to

I once heard some rumors
About you and this girl
Kissing her lips
Telling her she was your world

I can’t ask you
Because I melt when you hold me
Even though when I look in your eyes
A player I see

I don't want to get hurt
But I can’t love you
I can’t pretend
I don't know the truth

So go with her
And leave me
I’m stronger
Than I ever thought I’d be.




Copyright © Xxluckie_lynnxX ... [ 2004-07-29 19:52:50]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: No Trust In You (User Rating: 1 )
by punkprincess6689 on Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 08:52:44 PM AEST
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that was really good and i no exactly how u feel. im goning thro that rite now. keep riting.


Re: No Trust In You (User Rating: 1 )
by matts_sweetie_04 on Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 03:37:39 PM AEST
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hey cuz!!!! Of course you put my fav poem you wrote. Keep it up you have talent! Finally i have someone who is following in my footsteps!

~sMiLe~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Re: No Trust In You (User Rating: 1 )
by XOashleyreneXO on Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 06:35:31 PM AEST
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awesome poem...i love all of them. you need to keep writing to entertain the world an to entertain yourself. i know that is what you do in your spare time an all of the other times...lol! keep it up!

Love you lotz! ashley rene'


Re: No Trust In You (User Rating: 1 )
by ihopeyouchokex on Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 05:33:50 PM AEST
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this poem is truly inderedible,it has so much feeling in it

its simpple amazing

oh yeah-thanks for commenting in my poem




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