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Array ( [sid] => 58148 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A Love Story [time] => 2004-07-30 06:35:26 [hometext] => I dont write happy poems so this is a change for me.. lets see what happens [bodytext] => Kiss me here and kiss me there,
Tell me baby that you really care,
Feeling your body next to mine,
Stops my heart, stops all times,
Just hold me now don’t let me go,
Hold my hand, let’s take it slow,
Feels like we’d be here forever,
Just lying here being together,
The midnight sky held high above,
The murky moon shows our love,
My pain is a memory in the past,
Cos I know our love will truly last,
Just hug me now, be with me,
To let the people pass and see,
And just with the rising morning sun,
My broken heart was again a one
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A Love Story

Contributed by corrupted_minds on Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 06:35:26 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Kiss me here and kiss me there,
Tell me baby that you really care,
Feeling your body next to mine,
Stops my heart, stops all times,
Just hold me now don’t let me go,
Hold my hand, let’s take it slow,
Feels like we’d be here forever,
Just lying here being together,
The midnight sky held high above,
The murky moon shows our love,
My pain is a memory in the past,
Cos I know our love will truly last,
Just hug me now, be with me,
To let the people pass and see,
And just with the rising morning sun,
My broken heart was again a one

Copyright Â© corrupted_minds ... [ 2004-07-30 06:35:26]
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Re: A Love Story (User Rating: 1 )
by WinterFawn on Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 06:39:21 AM AEST
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Very nice. Love the lines "The midnight sky held high above,
The murky moon shows our love,"

Great verse.

WinterFawn

Re: A Love Story (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 06:44:41 AM AEST
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Very romantic, for one who says they don't write happy poems... You should do this more often.....
Jenni

Re: A Love Story (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 07:10:40 AM AEST
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I agree with Jenni. I think that you should write happy poems more often you have a real talent for them as well as your emotional writes

pixie xx

Re: A Love Story (User Rating: 1 )
by katyqueen35 on Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 07:28:03 AM AEST
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For a person that don't write happy poems .
Did a very well done job on this one...beautiful and romantic....

Re: A Love Story (User Rating: 1 )
by SweetRhythm on Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 06:43:30 AM AEST
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Auh this is truly beautiful. The words melted my heart, its very touching sweet romantic tale. Lovely work.
Corinna

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