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Array ( [sid] => 58262 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Living In BROKEN-BRICK Walls. [time] => 2004-07-31 03:48:13 [hometext] => I was feeling low.Drained and deprived from all my self-respect.I was hating myself.And missing my * (boyfriend),and I was telling myself how there's no point in trying 'coz at the end of the day i'll just fall again..And I was falling as I wrote this [bodytext] => At the bottom of my tummy.
There's a dark knotted pain.
And this happens every time,
When I start to feel more flames.

Enough is too much,
Because for-ever I will fall.
And then just as I stand again.
Life will AGAIN shatter my walls.

I'm trying to resist,
Making more scars on my skin.
But the truth is that the mist,
Is comming to get me again.

I CAN'T TAKE THIS!
With this bitter feeling inside,
I miss my *,
And still see dark memories when I close my eyes! [comments] => 3 [counter] => 252 [topic] => 65 [informant] => deathdrop [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => toughstuff )

Living In BROKEN-BRICK Walls.

Contributed by deathdrop on Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 03:48:13 AM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff

At the bottom of my tummy.
There's a dark knotted pain.
And this happens every time,
When I start to feel more flames.

Enough is too much,
Because for-ever I will fall.
And then just as I stand again.
Life will AGAIN shatter my walls.

I'm trying to resist,
Making more scars on my skin.
But the truth is that the mist,
Is comming to get me again.

I CAN'T TAKE THIS!
With this bitter feeling inside,
I miss my *,
And still see dark memories when I close my eyes!

Copyright © deathdrop ... [ 2004-07-31 03:48:13]
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Re: Living In BROKEN-BRICK Walls. (User Rating: 1 )
by cauchy3 on Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 04:28:43 AM AEST
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Not too sad . Baby lions are not hurt under slops. Some day A proud woman on back or front stages

Re: Living In BROKEN-BRICK Walls. (User Rating: 1 )
by BrandySwanson on Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 01:19:25 PM AEST
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a little sad I can relate to this one. great job on writing this poem and thanks for sharing it.

I love these two stanza's

Enough is too much,
Because for-ever I will fall.
And then just as I stand again.
Life will AGAIN shatter my walls.

I CAN'T TAKE THIS!
With this bitter feeling inside,
I miss my *,
And still see dark memories when I close my eyes!

Brandy

Re: Living In BROKEN-BRICK Walls. (User Rating: 1 )
by Broken_Skin on Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 07:04:57 AM AEST
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This touches my heart some where
pretty deep..
I know this pain
You need to sort yourself out

BS x

upsetting write 4/5

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