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Array ( [sid] => 58285 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Paint [time] => 2004-07-31 12:17:52 [hometext] => One more stroke to make the pain fade away, once the colours fill the page, the memory will stain [bodytext] => And this is where you left me
To slowly go mad in my mind
And I値l lie here every night and wish
That I could forget you and I

Please, wash me in a watercolour coat of ignorant bliss
So I can forget every memory, every love song, every single wish

I was born to destroy
And you were born to heal
So when you heal my every wound
I destroy everything that makes you feel

Please, take this paintbrush, and paint me a colour to fade
We値l block out every love song, every wish and every memory we made

And so you wanted tomorrow
While I wanted the world in my hand
Every time you tried to help
I destroyed everything that made you understand

Please paint a masterpiece, and erase everything I tried to be
Erase my every love song, my every wish and every loving memory

I paint each day to forget you
I paint each memory away
I値l slash at my canvas of guilt
Until I can finally be okay

I値l paint a pretty picture, somewhere I will hide
So you値l never see each brush stroke, is killing me inside [comments] => 5 [counter] => 198 [topic] => 22 [informant] => carmen_queasy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
Paint

Contributed by carmen_queasy on Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 12:17:52 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



And this is where you left me
To slowly go mad in my mind
And I値l lie here every night and wish
That I could forget you and I

Please, wash me in a watercolour coat of ignorant bliss
So I can forget every memory, every love song, every single wish

I was born to destroy
And you were born to heal
So when you heal my every wound
I destroy everything that makes you feel

Please, take this paintbrush, and paint me a colour to fade
We値l block out every love song, every wish and every memory we made

And so you wanted tomorrow
While I wanted the world in my hand
Every time you tried to help
I destroyed everything that made you understand

Please paint a masterpiece, and erase everything I tried to be
Erase my every love song, my every wish and every loving memory

I paint each day to forget you
I paint each memory away
I値l slash at my canvas of guilt
Until I can finally be okay

I値l paint a pretty picture, somewhere I will hide
So you値l never see each brush stroke, is killing me inside




Copyright ツゥ carmen_queasy ... [ 2004-07-31 12:17:52]
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Re: Paint (User Rating: 1 )
by lovespoetic0518 on Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 12:23:30 PM AEST
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I think this is a wonderful poem. Very different. Beautiful write.

Kimberly :)


Re: Paint (User Rating: 1 )
by slayer_015 on Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 12:53:15 PM AEST
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One word,awesome,I have benn swept away by your river of imagery.Keep writing please,I love this poem.



Brian


Re: Paint (User Rating: 1 )
by dolly_dagger on Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 01:12:51 PM AEST
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this is excellent. a very interesting composition. it portrays the irrationality you are feeling very well. full of emotion and highly creative. painting is a great way to express yourself and i thoroughly relate.
xxx


Re: Paint (User Rating: 1 )
by dolly_dagger on Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 01:14:29 PM AEST
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this is excellent. a very interesting composition. it portrays the irrationality you are feeling very well. full of emotion and highly creative. painting is a great way to express yourself and i thoroughly relate.
xxx


Re: Paint (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 01:20:02 PM AEST
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Very good write.....
Jenni




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