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Array ( [sid] => 58287 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I hate this world you left me in [time] => 2004-07-31 13:31:33 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I go for days sometimes
without you on my mind
but once your thought reappears
you put me in a bind

I still feel so much love
but I feel so much more hate
I dont know where to turn
or how much more I can take

I hate what you have done to me
I hate who I"ve become
I hate to feel so alone
I hate to feel so dumb

I hate that I believed in you
that I trusted you so much
I hate the way I still long
just to feel your touch

I hate the way I miss you
I hate it when I cry
I hate this world you left me in
things seem so awry

I hate to see the sun come up
and watch it set again
can never sleep, only weep
just remembering your sins

I hate this pain you left me with
burning deep inside
I hate the memories I have
and that I never got good-bye

I hate so much of my life
and what you forced me through
but what I hate the most
is still being in love with you

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I hate this world you left me in

Contributed by holderofthestone on Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 01:31:33 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I go for days sometimes
without you on my mind
but once your thought reappears
you put me in a bind

I still feel so much love
but I feel so much more hate
I dont know where to turn
or how much more I can take

I hate what you have done to me
I hate who I"ve become
I hate to feel so alone
I hate to feel so dumb

I hate that I believed in you
that I trusted you so much
I hate the way I still long
just to feel your touch

I hate the way I miss you
I hate it when I cry
I hate this world you left me in
things seem so awry

I hate to see the sun come up
and watch it set again
can never sleep, only weep
just remembering your sins

I hate this pain you left me with
burning deep inside
I hate the memories I have
and that I never got good-bye

I hate so much of my life
and what you forced me through
but what I hate the most
is still being in love with you

Copyright © holderofthestone ... [ 2004-07-31 13:31:33]
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Re: I hate this world you left me in (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 01:38:33 PM AEST
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Awwww Holder, not heard from you for awhile and what a poem to come back on, very sad and emotional write......

takecare

pixie xx

Re: I hate this world you left me in (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 01:46:03 PM AEST
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Sad and heartfelt, but lovely flow.. Enjoyed it..
Jenni

Re: I hate this world you left me in (User Rating: 1 )
by slayer_015 on Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 01:47:37 PM AEST
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My first wife hurt me like this,so I can understand some of your pain.Awesome poem!

Brian

Re: I hate this world you left me in (User Rating: 1 )
by Broken_Skin on Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 03:19:01 PM AEST
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This is very emotive and stunning.
I loved it
Very deep and real, just what i like

BS x

Re: I hate this world you left me in (User Rating: 1 )
by tifrob on Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 07:04:42 PM AEST
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How touching and honest. It was beautiful. Good luck...

J~

Re: I hate this world you left me in (User Rating: 1 )
by storm_amoure on Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 07:42:12 PM AEST
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that was a great poem, i loved it. but it also didn't help my theory on "love sucks" i've been here before and it really does suck.

Re: I hate this world you left me in (User Rating: 1 )
by CrimsonTears on Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 01:13:59 PM AEST
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fantastic write....i can relate...amazing job

Lots of Love
CrimsonTears

Re: I hate this world you left me in (User Rating: 1 )
by Living_In_My_Dream on Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 12:48:01 AM AEST
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wow chris, a beautiful flow and a very unique write I ejoyed and very much can relate as always...keep it up...

much love,
Dani

Re: I hate this world you left me in (User Rating: 1 )
by MDodgen on Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 12:08:14 PM AEST
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wow, hope it wasn't me that hurt you. nice write. good images.

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