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Array ( [sid] => 58298 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Somehow... [time] => 2004-07-31 14:56:11 [hometext] => [bodytext] => the end is near, so near my friend
I fear its coming to an end
I search for days and days to find
the answers in my fading mind
my time has come, my life is past
you said you loved me, it didn't last
you took my soul and ran away
you took my life with you that day
I only ask for one last thing
kill your memory, and the pain it brings
I live to love, yet hate to live
so much to take, nothing to give
without your hand here in mine
I'll be alone to the end of time
I dream of you day and night
I struggle on, but lose the fight
so hear my cries, see my tears
and know you caused all my fears
Its you I longed to hold so near
to hold you and to mold my dear
but you moved on to a better life
and left me buried in your strife
just me, my pain, my broken soul
all three of which you still control
you never go you never leave
you just continue to haunt me
so take your bow and then please fly
leave me to cry leave me to die
and take your thought with you please
loosen your grip, put my mind at ease
you haunting me just cant go on
you still remain even though your gone
I know eventually I'll crack
and damn my lust for wanting you back
cause even though you broke my heart
I'd try again with a clean start
and even I know you'd do it again
I'd relive the pain, to just touch your skin
you were my world my everything
but what remains is this sting
of what we were and all I've lost
but somehow it was was worth the cost...




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Somehow...

Contributed by holderofthestone on Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 02:56:11 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



the end is near, so near my friend
I fear its coming to an end
I search for days and days to find
the answers in my fading mind
my time has come, my life is past
you said you loved me, it didn't last
you took my soul and ran away
you took my life with you that day
I only ask for one last thing
kill your memory, and the pain it brings
I live to love, yet hate to live
so much to take, nothing to give
without your hand here in mine
I'll be alone to the end of time
I dream of you day and night
I struggle on, but lose the fight
so hear my cries, see my tears
and know you caused all my fears
Its you I longed to hold so near
to hold you and to mold my dear
but you moved on to a better life
and left me buried in your strife
just me, my pain, my broken soul
all three of which you still control
you never go you never leave
you just continue to haunt me
so take your bow and then please fly
leave me to cry leave me to die
and take your thought with you please
loosen your grip, put my mind at ease
you haunting me just cant go on
you still remain even though your gone
I know eventually I'll crack
and damn my lust for wanting you back
cause even though you broke my heart
I'd try again with a clean start
and even I know you'd do it again
I'd relive the pain, to just touch your skin
you were my world my everything
but what remains is this sting
of what we were and all I've lost
but somehow it was was worth the cost...








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Re: Somehow... (User Rating: 1 )
by bttrflynajar on Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 03:37:19 PM AEST
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once again you amaza me with a beautiful poem, i know the feeling behind this, my poem, lost you is about the same thing, but not nearly as strung as yours.
truly a great write,
~bttrfly~


Re: Somehow... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 04:00:28 PM AEST
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you are extremely gifted to be able to put such sensitive emotions into a clear yet deep poem. i respect you so much for letting people no exactly how you feel. i hope everything gets better for you. *hug* sooze xxx


Re: Somehow... (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 04:59:42 PM AEST
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beautiful.... hugs n' love nessa

@->>->:-


Re: Somehow... (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 05:20:51 AM AEST
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you are such an emotional and captivating writer, I love your work... have missed you on the site

takecare
pixie xx


Re: Somehow... (User Rating: 1 )
by CrimsonTears on Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 08:24:11 PM AEST
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wow..this is an awesome write...great job

Lots of Love
CrimsonTears


Re: Somehow... (User Rating: 1 )
by Calista on Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 09:40:48 PM AEST
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Chrisssssss! jeez...i dont even know what to say, i think ive used all my adjectives on you already. this piece is different to me, something clicked inside, it works. it melts you down because we can all relate, and you write it cleary, more clearly than my own heart could feel it when it happened to me. a genuine poet you are. thanks,
~Calista


Re: Somehow... (User Rating: 1 )
by Living_In_My_Dream on Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 01:26:48 AM AEST
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speechless, I loved this one very much beautiful

much love,
Dani


Re: Somehow... (User Rating: 1 )
by MDodgen on Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 12:04:52 PM AEST
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I know eventually I'll crack
and damn my lust for wanting you back

beautiful write, very powerful. but guess what? it leaves me guess who it's about. i love you.

MDodgen




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