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Array ( [sid] => 58532 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => ALWAYS! [time] => 2004-08-02 13:00:51 [hometext] => always fights...never love...i cant remember what i never had...or did we have it...underneath?...tell me....was it always us never you? [bodytext] => get out
close the door
shutting out us
forever...
but the arguments linger
fresh in the dusty air
im swallowing the darkness
the blood spilt
the tears fell
no more...
its the end of you and me
your eyes i can feel seeping through the broken door
i shudder
and i wonder
how i bought all the lies
how you convinced me it was ME
but i cant help thinking,knowing it was YOU
us...the two lovers brought into one
it was never ment to be
underneath,
there wasnt anything pass the arguments
how anyone made me feel this way
it was just another argument to say
'keep me close and dont spoil this for me,even if i reck you and scar your heart'
selfish
and it hurt even after all those years
inside i couldnt wait for you to be gone!
i was waiting what seemed an eternity
now you've gone it feels even longer...
i never stopped to think
to realise what i wanted
and now its the end of you
and the beginning of you
ive realised
oh my god
it was ALWAYS about YOU!!!

[comments] => 1 [counter] => 211 [topic] => 24 [informant] => Hannah_Heaven [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 13 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )
ALWAYS!

Contributed by Hannah_Heaven on Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 01:00:51 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered



get out
close the door
shutting out us
forever...
but the arguments linger
fresh in the dusty air
im swallowing the darkness
the blood spilt
the tears fell
no more...
its the end of you and me
your eyes i can feel seeping through the broken door
i shudder
and i wonder
how i bought all the lies
how you convinced me it was ME
but i cant help thinking,knowing it was YOU
us...the two lovers brought into one
it was never ment to be
underneath,
there wasnt anything pass the arguments
how anyone made me feel this way
it was just another argument to say
'keep me close and dont spoil this for me,even if i reck you and scar your heart'
selfish
and it hurt even after all those years
inside i couldnt wait for you to be gone!
i was waiting what seemed an eternity
now you've gone it feels even longer...
i never stopped to think
to realise what i wanted
and now its the end of you
and the beginning of you
ive realised
oh my god
it was ALWAYS about YOU!!!





Copyright © Hannah_Heaven ... [ 2004-08-02 13:00:51]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: ALWAYS! (User Rating: 1 )
by lovespoetic0518 on Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 01:32:10 PM AEST
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Now doesn't that feel great to let it out! Great poem. Great write!


Kimberly :)




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