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Array ( [sid] => 58538 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => flirting with death [time] => 2004-08-02 13:32:58 [hometext] => flirtacious,blackened love [bodytext] => his eyes
what eyes?
the sockets drooling with blood
they are grusome
but beautiful when flirting with death
to keep alive i must thrill the dead
and sell my body to keep my soul
my blackened body
my eyes ashamed of mistakes
but carry on
i feel dirty within
and i scrub myself but somehow dont peel
my body printed with the burnt on marks
each for the sin
of the unreturned wanting
i have been touched by many
loved by some
but what's left of my heart
belongs to him
he shines above all
and i shine inside
the darkened croners alight somehow
and i know when this is threw
he will be waiting for me
as i flutter my eyes
and scream out in pain of this abuse
my body aches
and my soul flitters
but i carry on
waiting for him to welcome me
and this is a sin
of the living sinning with the dead
as im flirting with death [comments] => 3 [counter] => 179 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Hannah_Heaven [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

flirting with death

Contributed by Hannah_Heaven on Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 01:32:58 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

his eyes
what eyes?
the sockets drooling with blood
they are grusome
but beautiful when flirting with death
to keep alive i must thrill the dead
and sell my body to keep my soul
my blackened body
my eyes ashamed of mistakes
but carry on
i feel dirty within
and i scrub myself but somehow dont peel
my body printed with the burnt on marks
each for the sin
of the unreturned wanting
i have been touched by many
loved by some
but what's left of my heart
belongs to him
he shines above all
and i shine inside
the darkened croners alight somehow
and i know when this is threw
he will be waiting for me
as i flutter my eyes
and scream out in pain of this abuse
my body aches
and my soul flitters
but i carry on
waiting for him to welcome me
and this is a sin
of the living sinning with the dead
as im flirting with death

Copyright © Hannah_Heaven ... [ 2004-08-02 13:32:58]
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Re: flirting with death (User Rating: 1 )
by apollo on Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 01:41:44 PM AEST
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this is very emotional and very moving. do not flirt to much with death as sometimes flirting causes attachment. attachment with death leads to . . (well you know) this write really inspired me to thought, and i hope that all things reorganize themselves in your life so that you may once agian find happiness. whomever this poem is about is a very interesting individual and i would like to know who it is, it keeps me guessing, i think that is why i loved this poem so much.

brandon

Re: flirting with death (User Rating: 1 )
by KynaIsisPoetess on Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 01:45:35 PM AEST
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mmmm wonderfully and tastefully written! i too am curious as to who your male muse is!

Re: flirting with death (User Rating: 1 )
by Hannah_Heaven on Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 02:01:17 PM AEST
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lol i have no muse...its from within...like i form the charaters in my mind....though my boyfriend would probaly be in my mind at the time:) x

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