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Array ( [sid] => 58659 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Moving On... [time] => 2004-08-03 02:31:38 [hometext] => Comments & Ratings welcome! [bodytext] => A thousand miles per hour
Beats a heart losing power
The long descend wears on me
It's a sign of the oncoming tragedy
I feel so alive yet I can barely move
I feel like I've won but if I try I'll lose
Somethings got the best of me and needs to let go
I'm ready to get out and I want everyone to know
It's time to be me again
It's time to hang out with the friends
Nothing will hold me back
Not even your strongest attack
But a phone call from you and it all sounds the same
Tonight I'll stay home and be played by your game [comments] => 12 [counter] => 171 [topic] => 48 [informant] => WakeNsnoWboarder [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 13 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Moving On...

Contributed by WakeNsnoWboarder on Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 02:31:38 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

A thousand miles per hour
Beats a heart losing power
The long descend wears on me
It's a sign of the oncoming tragedy
I feel so alive yet I can barely move
I feel like I've won but if I try I'll lose
Somethings got the best of me and needs to let go
I'm ready to get out and I want everyone to know
It's time to be me again
It's time to hang out with the friends
Nothing will hold me back
Not even your strongest attack
But a phone call from you and it all sounds the same
Tonight I'll stay home and be played by your game

Copyright © WakeNsnoWboarder ... [ 2004-08-03 02:31:38]
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Re: Moving On... (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 02:36:46 AM AEST
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Okie dokie.
good writing and luv that style.
hugs, smiles,
emy

Re: Moving On... (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 02:36:48 AM AEST
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Okie dokie.
good writing and luv that style.
hugs, smiles,
emy

Re: Moving On... (User Rating: 1 )
by Row on Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 02:42:59 AM AEST
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nice work, it all works real well

Re: Moving On... (User Rating: 1 )
by Row on Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 02:43:01 AM AEST
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nice work, it all works real well

Re: Moving On... (User Rating: 1 )
by Row on Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 02:43:01 AM AEST
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nice work, it all works real well

Re: Moving On... (User Rating: 1 )
by Row on Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 02:43:01 AM AEST
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nice work, it all works real well

Re: Moving On... (User Rating: 1 )
by Row on Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 02:43:03 AM AEST
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nice work, it all works real well

Re: Moving On... (User Rating: 1 )
by Row on Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 02:43:03 AM AEST
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nice work, it all works real well

Re: Moving On... (User Rating: 1 )
by JoeDaddy on Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 03:26:08 AM AEST
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This is where I'm at right now. Thanks for the reminder!

Re: Moving On... (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 07:28:16 AM AEST
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You have to move on or you will never be! Good writie

Re: Moving On... (User Rating: 1 )
by lovespoetic0518 on Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 08:27:31 AM AEST
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Im just going to post ONCE. hehehe. Very well written poem. I like this theme. well done.

Kimberly :)

Re: Moving On... (User Rating: 1 )
by Butterflygirl40 on Tuesday, 27th December 2005 @ 02:24:42 AM AEST
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awsome poem!!

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