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The cut that never goes away
Contributed by
Gothik_Twitch
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Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 02:43:05 AM in AEST
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There is a nagging feeling in my mind.
Something is terribly wrong
My eyes are wet with tears
But i have no idea why
MAybe its because im not loved
Or maybe i hate my self deep down
All i know is i have a way out
I see the razor sitting on the wooden ledge
It screams my name "Twitch"
you know you want to use me. Im good for you
You know i am. Dont you like watching your blood drip
into the white tile sink...Draining...dripping....
Of course i do but im afriad
What if mommy sees what will she say
Screw that you know you need realease
But.....
No buts do it now or be in pain forever
I pick the cold metal up and drag it deep in my skin
The stingy feeling is here but i cant seem to stop
There arnt enough i cry!
Im silently screaming through my cuts
The blood is my realese
Another cut apears upon my arm and i just cant seem to stop
Im out of control
The cut never goes away for more appear beside or over it.
The blood is pouring on my daddies carpet
Will he be disturbed?
When he sees me lying in the black marble bathtub
Drained of blood
No more i try and say when i see my arm
There is no skin left
But "you" the cold angry blade wont stop
You drag yourself across my breast
my theigh and ankle looking for veins
You find one and drag your self over me
The blood is pouring and my breathing is shallow
Everything is fuzzy and my sences are disappeaing
Everything spinning im blackign out
Some one save me
Or ill haunt your dreams until you do
Im lying in this tub looking up at my daddie.
His eyes are tear splattered His nose is running
I tell him to stop
that i just cut abit
but when i open my mouth i find that i cannot speak
Im dead In a **** bathtub
No one really cared did they?
Its years from now and my spirit still wanders around
I see a boy my age cutting and burning.
He hears the voice too
I brush past him and he shivers
I whisper "The cut that will never go away"
He looks around
" boy get some help or you'll be just like me
"With the cut that never goes away.
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Re: The cut that never goes away
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 02:49:33 AM AEST
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| I love poetry I can relate to, and this, this I am most deffinetly in love with. |
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Re: The cut that never goes away
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by cj_ranson on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 02:53:56 AM AEST
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ur one messed up little dude, u kind of ppl reely siken me, ur problems r nothing, and u dont even value ur own life, taking it is just as bad as taking someone elses, u only other ppl not urself u selfish prick,
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Re: The cut that never goes away
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by deathdrop on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 03:13:02 AM AEST
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dark, awesome and very powerful!
i love the piece!
it's amazing.
i knows these feelings in many ways... as i am an ex-cutter.
i didn't find your poem too triggering. just incredibally deep and emotional... but then again, it takes a lot to make me cut, because i hate the addiction it used to give me, and the addiction is still get now.
keep up your writing, you had a supperb talent!
from deathdrop.
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Re: The cut that never goes away
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by Gothik_Twitch on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 03:18:17 AM AEST
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| FIRST OF CJ, IM NOT A DUDE, SECOND YOU HAVE IDEA THE SH*T IVE GONE THROGH, SO AS BAMBIS MOTHER ONCE SAID"IF U DONT HAVE NETHNG NICE TO SAY DONT SAY IT AT ALL,"BTW I LIKE MY SICKENING POETRY |
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Re: The cut that never goes away
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by corrupted_minds on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 04:38:26 AM AEST
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This poem is awesome. CJ ranson doesnt know what his saying im sorry and i appologise on behalf of him. I know how you feel and i have felt all the emotions you have shown through your poem. It's saw real raw emotions and it's great i can relate to it. CJ is like some happy person who doesnt understand how it feels to want to die. I write like you do and i know how you feel., Keep writing.
Love always
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Re: The cut that never goes away
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by gery_giggles on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 06:39:03 AM AEST
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i can relate to this poem alot. i know this pain..and i'm currently in withdrawal so it hit close to home
luv always |
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Re: The cut that never goes away
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by anonymussme on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 12:32:45 PM AEST
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| i've been commenting on poetry i thought was awsome today but this one surpasses them all. i can relate to it and its written very well. as the note said, it was a trigger but im 2 1/2 months "sober" of cutting so i cant start again now..... can i? |
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Re: The cut that never goes away
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by pyro_88 on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 03:52:22 PM AEST
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| u wrote this poem really good. i can relate 100% to this poem. great job. hope to see more. |
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Re: The cut that never goes away
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by CrimsonTears on
Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 12:12:41 PM AEST
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This is an absolutely amazing poem....i can relate all to well...and that CJ person probably has no idea what its like to want to die all the time....but i know exactly how u feel..i write poetry very very similar to this.....this is an awesome write....great job...FANTASTIC!!
Lots of Love
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