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Array ( [sid] => 58663 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Paralysis [time] => 2004-08-03 03:06:26 [hometext] => When you want to say something, do something, but are afraid to act....in fear that you may dissolve all chance of it being. [bodytext] => Static of spirit, static of mind,
A static position, trapped in time,
Afraid of movement, wrought with fear,
Of what could be not,
The elimination of a l dream dear,
Paralysed moments, opportunities lost,
Is that preferable, to the potential cost,
Inaction a perpetuation of anxiety,
To maintain a stilted vision of what I would see. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 179 [topic] => 2 [informant] => fredlost [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Paralysis

Contributed by fredlost on Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 03:06:26 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Static of spirit, static of mind,
A static position, trapped in time,
Afraid of movement, wrought with fear,
Of what could be not,
The elimination of a l dream dear,
Paralysed moments, opportunities lost,
Is that preferable, to the potential cost,
Inaction a perpetuation of anxiety,
To maintain a stilted vision of what I would see.

Copyright © fredlost ... [ 2004-08-03 03:06:26]
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Re: Paralysis (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 03:58:19 AM AEST
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I'm not sure about some of the words/phrases you use, as they seem overcomplicated to me;

"stilted vision" & "The elimination of a l dream dear"

Yet, I still find your message resonant, as I too have experienced this state of mind.

Thanks for sharing, and welcome to YPDC.

Re: Paralysis (User Rating: 1 )
by fredlost on Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 04:51:41 AM AEST
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Thanks for your comment. Whilst my phrasing may seem overcomplicated, it is simply a reflection of the manner in which I converse on paper, for better of worse. Further I hark back, to the scriblings of writers of yore, rather then the contempory preference of some for the 'simplistic'.

p.s I have found the answer to my previous question, if you lack comments....simply write your own. Pure unadulterated genius.

Re: Paralysis (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 04:26:51 PM AEST
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I can surely relate to this....in a simplier way, of course..:>)
Jenni

Re: Paralysis (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 04:26:52 PM AEST
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I can surely relate to this....in a simplier way, of course..:>)
Jenni

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