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Array ( [sid] => 58749 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Before and after [time] => 2004-08-03 18:26:50 [hometext] => [bodytext] => In the beginging we weren't this close
how now we're all open and exposed,
its nice to see the real you,
the true you.
It's really a great sight,
to see at least just for that little time at night.
After i got to know you and you were comfertable around me,
even you can agree,
when I saythings are going just great!
After our 3 dates,
you can just tell
on out first date you were hiding in your shell.
Our 2nd date your head was popping out,
and on our 3rd date you were offically our of your shell without a doubt.
It's great hoe taking things slowly can led to,
look at all thats happened between me and you.
We're very close now, we talk about everything
and just about anything.
Whatever pops up in our mind we say,
this goes on everyday.
It's great to see how close we got,
its great to see how shy your not,
and how you solve you problems that you got
its great I like them alot
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Before and after

Contributed by Lilkrazybaby6 on Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 06:26:50 PM in AEST
Topic: StoryPoetry

In the beginging we weren't this close
how now we're all open and exposed,
its nice to see the real you,
the true you.
It's really a great sight,
to see at least just for that little time at night.
After i got to know you and you were comfertable around me,
even you can agree,
when I saythings are going just great!
After our 3 dates,
you can just tell
on out first date you were hiding in your shell.
Our 2nd date your head was popping out,
and on our 3rd date you were offically our of your shell without a doubt.
It's great hoe taking things slowly can led to,
look at all thats happened between me and you.
We're very close now, we talk about everything
and just about anything.
Whatever pops up in our mind we say,
this goes on everyday.
It's great to see how close we got,
its great to see how shy your not,
and how you solve you problems that you got
its great I like them alot

Copyright © Lilkrazybaby6 ... [ 2004-08-03 18:26:50]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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