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Array ( [sid] => 58768 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => This feeling [time] => 2004-08-03 21:54:43 [hometext] => This poem i wrote just a few minutes ago...about someone i really like....sorry the mistakes if any... [bodytext] => Here I am All alone
Thinking of nothing
Nothing else but just this one thing
After Just one single day
How can someone make me feel this way
This is so unlike me in so many ways

Part of me adores this another part I hate
But I guess....it's just too damn late
Look what you did that I do not blame
I'm so happy and yet so sad and nervous when I say your name.

But even for a moment when I spent such time with you
I do not know...just what to do
I want to come out and tell you that you've been on my mind
Why I don't know..maybe cuz You're just so kind
Maybe...Even I don't know

I want to tell you..
My friends say I Should just come out and tell you
They say "Oh why can't he just See!"
But...if I’d tell you...Would you even believe me
Cause I know myself I'm not one who would just blunting come out and say such a thing
Most of time...I say nothing.

At times When I think about this whole thing through
For some reason ....tears come to my eyes
Tears just by thinkin of you
because I have this feeling that This is only one-sided
And with that...I still haven't decided.
On what should I do
To keep it hidden or just come out and tell you
I think I'm ready To say what my friends been wanting for me to say for such a long time
The reason maybe you been on my mind
Maybe it's because of this one thing
I've never quite felt before
That just I never thought I would say or come to realize ...I come to knew
That I Think.
I've fallen in love with you. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 199 [topic] => 2 [informant] => ChichiriFreak [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
This feeling

Contributed by ChichiriFreak on Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 09:54:43 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Here I am All alone
Thinking of nothing
Nothing else but just this one thing
After Just one single day
How can someone make me feel this way
This is so unlike me in so many ways

Part of me adores this another part I hate
But I guess....it's just too damn late
Look what you did that I do not blame
I'm so happy and yet so sad and nervous when I say your name.

But even for a moment when I spent such time with you
I do not know...just what to do
I want to come out and tell you that you've been on my mind
Why I don't know..maybe cuz You're just so kind
Maybe...Even I don't know

I want to tell you..
My friends say I Should just come out and tell you
They say "Oh why can't he just See!"
But...if I’d tell you...Would you even believe me
Cause I know myself I'm not one who would just blunting come out and say such a thing
Most of time...I say nothing.

At times When I think about this whole thing through
For some reason ....tears come to my eyes
Tears just by thinkin of you
because I have this feeling that This is only one-sided
And with that...I still haven't decided.
On what should I do
To keep it hidden or just come out and tell you
I think I'm ready To say what my friends been wanting for me to say for such a long time
The reason maybe you been on my mind
Maybe it's because of this one thing
I've never quite felt before
That just I never thought I would say or come to realize ...I come to knew
That I Think.
I've fallen in love with you.




Copyright © ChichiriFreak ... [ 2004-08-03 21:54:43]
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Re: This feeling (User Rating: 1 )
by richcol7522 on Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 10:02:12 PM AEST
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I know how you feel. I felt this way when I met my wife. I was pretty much the same way that you are. I took me a while too to come forward and tell her how I felt about her.. I was just lucky that she felt the same way that I did. You did a wonderful job. Good writting.


Re: This feeling (User Rating: 1 )
by Mick_Puttock on Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 10:25:16 PM AEST
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A great write and I know the feeling. Unfortunatley.....




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