Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	10-June 02:35:14 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 5877 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Still Won't Cry [time] => 2002-10-30 05:00:00 [hometext] => This is about a boy, close enough to be my brother whom I've never seen cry; even through the greatest heartbreaks. I figure, he cries alone... [bodytext] => He’s been through the death of people so close
The kind that hurts your heart the most
The ones he love and care for so much
One day is seen; next day can’t touch
And though it’s killing him so deep inside
All those emotions he decides to hide
We both know how hard it is to try
To let go of a loved one you wish didn’t die
Through all his pain I’ve wondered why, why is it that he still wont cry

He’s been through so much yet so young
Anything he says isn’t a slip of the tongue
It’s what he wants to really say
Not the words you wish would come your way
Our words are so deep, I’ve cried when I called
And before I’d go to sleep, through his thoughts my feelings crawled
And when he feels my pain, I know his pain runs deeper
Sometimes I feel my angel tells him, “Don’t you know you have to keep her”
If we ever part eternally & never say goodbye
It makes me want to wonder if he still won’t cry
[comments] => 7 [counter] => 212 [topic] => 31 [informant] => Poetic_Angel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => StoryPoetry )

Still Won't Cry

Contributed by Poetic_Angel on Wednesday, 30th October 2002 @ 05:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: StoryPoetry

He’s been through the death of people so close
The kind that hurts your heart the most
The ones he love and care for so much
One day is seen; next day can’t touch
And though it’s killing him so deep inside
All those emotions he decides to hide
We both know how hard it is to try
To let go of a loved one you wish didn’t die
Through all his pain I’ve wondered why, why is it that he still wont cry

He’s been through so much yet so young
Anything he says isn’t a slip of the tongue
It’s what he wants to really say
Not the words you wish would come your way
Our words are so deep, I’ve cried when I called
And before I’d go to sleep, through his thoughts my feelings crawled
And when he feels my pain, I know his pain runs deeper
Sometimes I feel my angel tells him, “Don’t you know you have to keep her”
If we ever part eternally & never say goodbye
It makes me want to wonder if he still won’t cry

Copyright Â© Poetic_Angel ... [ 2002-10-30 05:00:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: Still Won't Cry (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Wednesday, 30th October 2002 @ 06:08:07 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

This one pulls the heartstrings.... beautiful write... though so sad...

Daniela

Re: Still Won't Cry (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Wednesday, 30th October 2002 @ 07:19:28 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

This is so heartfelt and deep
Some people don't cry in front
of others, but just because you
cannot see them cry doesn't mean
that they don't. Great write.
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.

Re: Still Won't Cry (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Wednesday, 30th October 2002 @ 08:03:20 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Very touching poetry,most guys wont cry in front of some people,to answer your guestion he cries, just behind closed doors! Thats from my husband!!! Christina & Rob

Re: Still Won't Cry (User Rating: 1 )
by GEQUETSCHT on Wednesday, 30th October 2002 @ 09:37:10 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Awww...

so before i end my day, remember.....it all heals in time...

Ali

Re: Still Won't Cry (User Rating: 1 )
by ginsdance on Wednesday, 30th October 2002 @ 11:35:44 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

This one is a heart breaker. I try to keep things locked up inside too, that's why I picked up writing... I wonder if he writes in secret to let go of the pain??? Great write! And I am sure, even if he doesn't cry, he would miss you greatly.

Ginnie

Re: Still Won't Cry (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 05:08:27 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

You convey perfectly feelings and emotions. You have a great friend. When you don't cry, the tears well up and fill your soul. Be there for him, ok?
Take care.
David

Re: Still Won't Cry (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 05:08:30 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

You convey perfectly feelings and emotions. You have a great friend. When you don't cry, the tears well up and fill your soul. Be there for him, ok?
Take care.
David

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. Â©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright Â© to their submitter. All the rest Copyright Â© 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com