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And a new life is born.
As you leave a world of fame,
And enter into a world of shame.

A world where darkness carries out through the land,
And minds become turmoil in man.
These were the cards dealt from your hand,
Now you too, live in a darkened land.

Always walking in the shadows,
And living a life so shallow.
Hiding in the night,
And filling others lives with fright.

Waiting in the darkness,
So you too, can send a darkened kiss.
This is the life,
That was promised to be so bliss.

2004 Copyright By: Ronald William Smith [comments] => 5 [counter] => 190 [topic] => 13 [informant] => rylo [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Reborn

Contributed by rylo on Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 05:39:40 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Your soul is torn,
And a new life is born.
As you leave a world of fame,
And enter into a world of shame.

A world where darkness carries out through the land,
And minds become turmoil in man.
These were the cards dealt from your hand,
Now you too, live in a darkened land.

Always walking in the shadows,
And living a life so shallow.
Hiding in the night,
And filling others lives with fright.

Waiting in the darkness,
So you too, can send a darkened kiss.
This is the life,
That was promised to be so bliss.

2004 Copyright By: Ronald William Smith

Copyright © rylo ... [ 2004-08-05 17:39:40]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Reborn (User Rating: 1 )
by TheRaven on Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 05:43:18 PM AEST
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excellent job with the rhyme. good 'plot', loved it. keep it up.
the raven

Re: Reborn (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 05:47:33 PM AEST
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yes yes yes!!!!!!! Your back!
Michelle

Re: Reborn (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 10:47:32 PM AEST
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i completely loved this piece.

Re: Reborn (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 04:32:55 AM AEST
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Amazing that you have so much talent.your work is like a work of art.

Re: Reborn (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 06:47:54 PM AEST
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Awesome write! The last stanza was especially great. Nice work.

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