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Array ( [sid] => 59115 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => paralyzed, i can no longer feel [time] => 2004-08-06 10:04:18 [hometext] => this was a pretty quick write, so i know that it could be improved on but then atleast i have posted something for today. Comments please. Thankz corrupted_minds [bodytext] => Paralyzed, I can no longer feel,
Just like I can no longer heal,
Torment is all I know is real,
And now my skins begun to peal,

Love and hate both hurt the same,
And in the end what do we gain?
This restless heart you will not tame,
Even in the sunlight the clouds will rain,

Moonlight reaches both my eyes,
Both weary from my lonely cries,
It’s like when only someone tries,
Then another innocent person dies,

So let me go I need to run,
This life I’ve had was less than fun,
I need to go, it must be done,
Then over life I’ve finally won,

Burning wax will scar my arm,
Don’t worry I meant to cause me harm,
If there’s blood don’t be alarm,
I’m still in flesh so still stay calm,

In my bed my wrists will bleed,
Then I have everything in life I need,
With each drop will exit creed,
And when I’m empty I’m finally freed,

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paralyzed, i can no longer feel

Contributed by corrupted_minds on Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 10:04:18 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Paralyzed, I can no longer feel,
Just like I can no longer heal,
Torment is all I know is real,
And now my skins begun to peal,

Love and hate both hurt the same,
And in the end what do we gain?
This restless heart you will not tame,
Even in the sunlight the clouds will rain,

Moonlight reaches both my eyes,
Both weary from my lonely cries,
It’s like when only someone tries,
Then another innocent person dies,

So let me go I need to run,
This life I’ve had was less than fun,
I need to go, it must be done,
Then over life I’ve finally won,

Burning wax will scar my arm,
Don’t worry I meant to cause me harm,
If there’s blood don’t be alarm,
I’m still in flesh so still stay calm,

In my bed my wrists will bleed,
Then I have everything in life I need,
With each drop will exit creed,
And when I’m empty I’m finally freed,

Copyright Â© corrupted_minds ... [ 2004-08-06 10:04:18]
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Re: paralyzed, i can no longer feel (User Rating: 1 )
by Nazmythian on Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 10:15:40 AM AEST
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Just a little minor polish and it would be perfect. An excellent quick write.

Re: paralyzed, i can no longer feel (User Rating: 1 )
by lovespoetic0518 on Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 10:16:59 AM AEST
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A very good write, A very sad thought. I hope that you can try to get over whatever has depressed you enough to write this poem. Take care

Kimberly :)

Re: paralyzed, i can no longer feel (User Rating: 1 )
by Dizza_13 on Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 10:02:08 PM AEST
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Great write. Real raw emotion. Im always here if you need to talk.

Dizza
xoxoxoxoxox

Re: paralyzed, i can no longer feel (User Rating: 1 )
by Hakiokusaken on Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 09:16:50 PM AEST
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I just read this now and had to comment. really good job.

Hakiokusaken

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