Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	02-June 13:07:58 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 59161 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => if this world [time] => 2004-08-06 16:27:02 [hometext] => [bodytext] => go ahead and ***** scream at me
but i will not do the same
go ahead and slice this skin
but i will not retaliate
go ahead and say those words
the words that stab the heart of me
but i can not hurt you

after all has been said and done
you i still would die for
after all the scars all the blood stains on my skin
i would kill for you
a mothers love is meant to never die
but you didnt even bother to say goodbye

go ahead and leave me here alone
i,m used to being unwanted unknown
please just hurt me one last time
i think i need it one last time
the feeling of hurt is related to love
but that i,ve never had
why don't you love me mummy why won't you care?
why when you force this blood to run do you not even stop or stare ?

if this world would give me one last chance to say goodbye
would you listen would you hear my crys ?
if this world took this life today would you cry for me? [comments] => 2 [counter] => 172 [topic] => 48 [informant] => grip-wth-broken-fingers [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

if this world

Contributed by grip-wth-broken-fingers on Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 04:27:02 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

go ahead and ***** scream at me
but i will not do the same
go ahead and slice this skin
but i will not retaliate
go ahead and say those words
the words that stab the heart of me
but i can not hurt you

after all has been said and done
you i still would die for
after all the scars all the blood stains on my skin
i would kill for you
a mothers love is meant to never die
but you didnt even bother to say goodbye

go ahead and leave me here alone
i,m used to being unwanted unknown
please just hurt me one last time
i think i need it one last time
the feeling of hurt is related to love
but that i,ve never had
why don't you love me mummy why won't you care?
why when you force this blood to run do you not even stop or stare ?

if this world would give me one last chance to say goodbye
would you listen would you hear my crys ?
if this world took this life today would you cry for me?

Copyright © grip-wth-broken-fingers ... [ 2004-08-06 16:27:02]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: if this world (User Rating: 1 )
by Nazmythian on Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 05:27:33 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

I just called my mom. I told her that I love her. Out of the blue for no reason, but for your words. It caught her off guard ... I think she might have cried. She told me she loves me too. I just wanted to say thank you !

Naz ~

Re: if this world (User Rating: 1 )
by Stew on Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 08:11:41 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

i thank you for writing this poem. because now i know that there are people out there who have mothers just like mine. i hope your mom can see you and hear you before the world does take you. please read some of mine and i hope you like them.

love forever
stew

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com