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Array ( [sid] => 59294 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Trish [time] => 2004-08-07 22:07:46 [hometext] => My wife will be leaving us in less than 2 years to leukemia, This is What i feel [bodytext] => Trish
My trust for her faultered, but her love never died,
We argued we cried, yet never did we Not want to try.

Such a rose with beauty and love who should Have been treated with Kid gloves,

How I wish The times I could change All those things i'd re-arange,
I'd have never stop sending my love
I'd Never dream of Giving you up,
Times were hard And altough I stumbled I never meant for our love to crumble,

These last years are here Now and All the thing i wish I knew how,
To change My age , Keep my faith, how to love you with out rage,

so many things I said when we cried I should never have Been hurt by Lies,
You were true to me and I never did See How much you really did loved me,

Yet now we come To autumn and fall,
Now you must go and Answer the call,

Although I love You so verry Much, I must let you go with Out any fuss
Because Now my dear is the time When you must go to the Light divine,

You've always wanted To return there,
And often did You try, But now you know for shure......

Did you really wanto to die?

I love you trish and I will Always Hold you close
Your heart your body Your soul and Your ghost.
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Trish

Contributed by somber on Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 10:07:46 PM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry



Trish
My trust for her faultered, but her love never died,
We argued we cried, yet never did we Not want to try.

Such a rose with beauty and love who should Have been treated with Kid gloves,

How I wish The times I could change All those things i'd re-arange,
I'd have never stop sending my love
I'd Never dream of Giving you up,
Times were hard And altough I stumbled I never meant for our love to crumble,

These last years are here Now and All the thing i wish I knew how,
To change My age , Keep my faith, how to love you with out rage,

so many things I said when we cried I should never have Been hurt by Lies,
You were true to me and I never did See How much you really did loved me,

Yet now we come To autumn and fall,
Now you must go and Answer the call,

Although I love You so verry Much, I must let you go with Out any fuss
Because Now my dear is the time When you must go to the Light divine,

You've always wanted To return there,
And often did You try, But now you know for shure......

Did you really wanto to die?

I love you trish and I will Always Hold you close
Your heart your body Your soul and Your ghost.




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Re: Trish (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 10:15:38 PM AEST
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I am so very very sorry for the pain and anguish you are both going through. I lost my husband a few months ago to illness and it took him a while so we did have time to get things settled, but you are never ready when it happens. Blessings to you both and may her pain be light.

Rita


Re: Trish (User Rating: 1 )
by cheech on Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 10:32:26 PM AEST
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aww!,as i read this i started to cry,my mom died from cancer and i 2 will die of cancer,don't worry ur lovely wife won't be gone without u for all eturnity u will 1 day meet up with her and be happy once again,i'm so so so sorry for u and ur wife and also ur family,i hope all the best to u and getting through this much pain,i know what ur going through,try to live each day to the fullest,i know its gonna be hard but its away to still have happy days left with ur wife trish


cheech


Re: Trish (User Rating: 1 )
by somber on Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 02:40:51 AM AEST
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Thank you for your words of comfort,
we have known for a while that she was ill, but when they told us less than 2 years it finaly sank in,
We hadnt been going through the best of times when we heard, But it has brought us closer than ever,
I have Cryed for days and still cry my self to sleep at night,
but we are going to do the most of the time we have left together,
She really is perfect.
and in the words of don mclean

this world was never ment for any one as beutifull as her.




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