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Array ( [sid] => 59306 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Socks [time] => 2004-08-08 00:05:42 [hometext] => [bodytext] =>

Two mismatched socks do I wear
down upon my feet;
one is old and loose and worn,
the other snug and neat.
And as I skip and walk and stroll
all about the town,
not a worry's paid the younger sock;
its mate keeps falling down!
Perhaps I should too mention
that the elder sock,
despite its threadbare, stubborn nature,
sure has seen a lot.
And though its younger counterpart,
trustworthy and fair,
may not have seen as many steps,
together they're a pair.

January 6th, 2004 [comments] => 7 [counter] => 193 [topic] => 25 [informant] => tlhInganHom [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )

Socks

Contributed by tlhInganHom on Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 12:05:42 AM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

Two mismatched socks do I wear
down upon my feet;
one is old and loose and worn,
the other snug and neat.
And as I skip and walk and stroll
all about the town,
not a worry's paid the younger sock;
its mate keeps falling down!
Perhaps I should too mention
that the elder sock,
despite its threadbare, stubborn nature,
sure has seen a lot.
And though its younger counterpart,
trustworthy and fair,
may not have seen as many steps,
together they're a pair.

January 6th, 2004

Copyright © tlhInganHom ... [ 2004-08-08 00:05:42]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Socks (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 01:01:33 AM AEST
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lovely poem =]

Re: Socks (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 03:26:08 AM AEST
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Nice work. I think we all have a pair or three of these.
Very nice graphics.
huggs, smiles,
emy

Re: Socks (User Rating: 1 )
by thumper on Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 08:32:48 AM AEST
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I loved this!! Thanx for a morning chuckle. :o) This was easy to read and had great rhythm.
Nice job!
Thumps ; 0)

Re: Socks (User Rating: 1 )
by n2dep2care on Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 09:34:17 PM AEST
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Very cute with a wonderful, subtle message. Great write!

Laurie

Re: Socks (User Rating: 1 )
by Tanmaya on Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 04:11:15 AM AEST
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I enjoyed reading this one!

Re: Socks (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 04:27:46 AM AEST
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Original and fascinating. I have mismatched socks, although they're always long lost cousins from a drawer of ill-repute.

I found the rhythm skipped a beat on this line;

"not a worry's paid the younger sock;"

Perhaps you could change it to 'no worry's', it might sound better. Just a suggestions.

Keep writing.

Re: Socks (User Rating: 1 )
by MissMandy on Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 11:23:26 PM AEST
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I think it's silly and a waste of brain space, not to mention a waste of what may be good talent. Don't be mad, I'm just giving an honest review.

~Mandy~

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