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[title] => the dream
[time] => 2004-08-08 15:27:22
[hometext] => please read and let me know what you think
[bodytext] => Elavator music plays in the background of this dream, I watch a black and white performance of what used to be, two lovers desperate for one another, embrace seductively, the memories of you and me, Strangely, I no longer feel the fire that once sent me into to a spiral of rapture, or the desire that had me begging for release, Suddenly the scence changes and I am reminded, of the pain, anquish, and tears, the mistake you made irreversable, and I have no intention of forgiveness, I see your smile but am not longer plagued with longing, I feel your touch almost as if I am there, but I feel numb inside, your touch leaves me cold, for I am now alone, because of your weakness, and pitiful exsistance, I am hollow, you took everything from me, in a single night, I'm not interested in appoligies, or your regret, I won't comprimse. Elevator music plays in the background of this dream, as I watch a black and white performance of what used to be copyright 2004 Jamie LeAnne Scalf -------aka----------"Jaylynne" [comments] => 5 [counter] => 188 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Jaylynne [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
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