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Array ( [sid] => 59374 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Adolescent girl [time] => 2004-08-08 16:19:01 [hometext] => PLease read [bodytext] => I loved a boy, he went away,
Felt just like the other day,
But when he left his love denied,
And in my room I sat and cried,
I locked the door, was left alone,
So no one could see I hadn稚 grown,
Adolescent girl with lots to learn,
But in my mind it壇 past my turn,
In the shade it痴 cold and hidden,
Once you池e there to leave, forbidden,
I try to die but I知 never dead,
I知 still just dreaming in your bed,
I want to sleep and never waken,
And when I bleed I知 never shaken,
When I scream I知 never heeded,
Just like now I知 never needed,
Slash open my numbing skin,
I have no God so I have no sin,
You think I知 selling myself short,
But no better was I taught,
So let it run and let it pour,
Cut again to bleed some more,
Bloodstained sheets and bloodstained mind,
My bloody body you will find,
But don稚 cry for me, I知 not worth your tears,
Me being dead am the least of your fears ,
I知 glad now I知 no longer a freak,
But ending my life I知 not strong I知 weak,
But no longer do I run and hide,
And no more times would I have cried,
The sky is grey but now it clears,
And my eyes are filled with happy tears


[comments] => 6 [counter] => 233 [topic] => 36 [informant] => corrupted_minds [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
Adolescent girl

Contributed by corrupted_minds on Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 04:19:01 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



I loved a boy, he went away,
Felt just like the other day,
But when he left his love denied,
And in my room I sat and cried,
I locked the door, was left alone,
So no one could see I hadn稚 grown,
Adolescent girl with lots to learn,
But in my mind it壇 past my turn,
In the shade it痴 cold and hidden,
Once you池e there to leave, forbidden,
I try to die but I知 never dead,
I知 still just dreaming in your bed,
I want to sleep and never waken,
And when I bleed I知 never shaken,
When I scream I知 never heeded,
Just like now I知 never needed,
Slash open my numbing skin,
I have no God so I have no sin,
You think I知 selling myself short,
But no better was I taught,
So let it run and let it pour,
Cut again to bleed some more,
Bloodstained sheets and bloodstained mind,
My bloody body you will find,
But don稚 cry for me, I知 not worth your tears,
Me being dead am the least of your fears ,
I知 glad now I知 no longer a freak,
But ending my life I知 not strong I知 weak,
But no longer do I run and hide,
And no more times would I have cried,
The sky is grey but now it clears,
And my eyes are filled with happy tears






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Re: Adolescent girl (User Rating: 1 )
by waos on Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 04:23:55 PM AEST
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Wow, that was really good. I loved the story in it because I feel it too, I love the wording you used, it rocks. And I love the last 2 lines too. That really rocked and I am gonna be checking out your other stuff from now on I think. Thanks for posting it. I mean it.


Re: Adolescent girl (User Rating: 1 )
by darkplaidbabe on Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 07:37:08 PM AEST
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i cant express how lovely this is. its so tragic and so sweetly sad. amazing poem .
Brynna


Re: Adolescent girl (User Rating: 1 )
by Dizza_13 on Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 01:32:47 AM AEST
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amazing write. I loved it. I wont leave loz, im here now
and always will be. i really liked
"So let it run and let it pour,
Cut again to bleed some more,
Bloodstained sheets and bloodstained mind,
My bloody body you will find"
great work

love always, Dizza
xoxoxoxo


Re: Adolescent girl (User Rating: 1 )
by TheBlackVoid on Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 02:27:40 AM AEST
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Great write..as many other poems i can truely relate to this..great way of expressing ur feelings..and i'll be looking for more
Alucia,


Re: Adolescent girl (User Rating: 1 )
by Hakiokusaken on Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 07:59:42 PM AEST
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Wow that was good. Great poem


Re: Adolescent girl (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 05:34:01 AM AEST
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it's a beautiful poem!
i bet all us cutters and ex-cutters will agree!




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