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Fair as can be
Fair as the moonbeam
Upon the sea

I pray to hold
You close once more
And walk with you
Upon the shore [comments] => 6 [counter] => 160 [topic] => 2 [informant] => wachumiri [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

You Are Fair

Contributed by wachumiri on Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 06:06:14 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

You are fair
Fair as can be
Fair as the moonbeam
Upon the sea

I pray to hold
You close once more
And walk with you
Upon the shore

Copyright © wachumiri ... [ 2004-08-08 18:06:14]
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Re: You Are Fair (User Rating: 1 )
by ChinaRivera on Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 12:27:32 AM AEST
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Nice poem. Short & sweet! - china

Re: You Are Fair (User Rating: 1 )
by faith_my_eyes on Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 03:28:36 PM AEST
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*sighs*

David, I know you are a romantic. And Carrrie is the coolest person ever, but...

You certainly reduced Carrie to a cliche with this one. Sorry.

Em

Re: You Are Fair (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 01:32:23 AM AEST
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What IS it with these typos? I know. You're turning to drink because you haven't seen Carrie for a few weeks. Pathetic, hopeless, miserable...
Er, yeah. Anyway, have a fir day yourself.

Andrew

Re: You Are Fair (User Rating: 1 )
by eatfresh22 on Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 12:58:25 PM AEST
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I must say the "fir" thing was quite disturbing. But, I can't complain that you're thinking about me. That's always nice. And walks upon the shore aren't all too bad either....as long as you don't throw me in!!!! I love you.
~Carrie~

Re: You Are Fair (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 03:48:19 PM AEST
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How do you constantly come up with these?
5 stars!

wildejohnny.

Re: You Are Fair (User Rating: 1 )
by anitajames on Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 10:40:10 AM AEST
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Romance, tenderness, love. What more do you need?

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