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Array ( [sid] => 59485 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Amy [time] => 2004-08-09 14:39:26 [hometext] => This poem was inspired by a clsoe friend of mine, but amy is not a real person, i dont know whay but people usually have to read it more then once to understand it [bodytext] => Jamie was a girl who pretened its all ok
she said she was someone else
deep down in the core of her heart numbness grew
thats where amy grew

Amy comes out when Jamie walks with her head down
Amy comes out when Jamie can only frown
Amy is Jamies makeup when Jamie is down

Jamie had problems like everyone elese
Jamie turned to amy like something elese
Jamie didet tell anyone the way that she felt
Jamies problems left undelt
Jamies feelings bottled inside
Amys hands were at her side

Amy comes out when Jamie walks with her head down
Amy comes out when Jamie can only frown
Amy is Jamies makeup when Jamie is down

Jamie went to Amy for fear of her self
Inside Jamie would cry and pout
so Amy was always about
Jamie locked in a world of dream
only wanting to wake and scream
As makeup wares away
Amys smile for jamie faded away
that was Jamies last day

Amy comes out when Jamie walks with her head down
Amy comes out when Jamie can only frown
Amy is Jamies makeup when Jamie is down

Only a gallon of water fits into a gallon
Jamies feelings flooded her heart
Jameis heart burst with fear
she thought her end was near
she dident know it was already here

Amy comes out when Jamie walks with her head down
Amy comes out when Jamie can only frown
Amy is Jamies makeup when Jamie is down

[comments] => 5 [counter] => 282 [topic] => 61 [informant] => Luka [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )
Amy

Contributed by Luka on Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 02:39:26 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles



Jamie was a girl who pretened its all ok
she said she was someone else
deep down in the core of her heart numbness grew
thats where amy grew

Amy comes out when Jamie walks with her head down
Amy comes out when Jamie can only frown
Amy is Jamies makeup when Jamie is down

Jamie had problems like everyone elese
Jamie turned to amy like something elese
Jamie didet tell anyone the way that she felt
Jamies problems left undelt
Jamies feelings bottled inside
Amys hands were at her side

Amy comes out when Jamie walks with her head down
Amy comes out when Jamie can only frown
Amy is Jamies makeup when Jamie is down

Jamie went to Amy for fear of her self
Inside Jamie would cry and pout
so Amy was always about
Jamie locked in a world of dream
only wanting to wake and scream
As makeup wares away
Amys smile for jamie faded away
that was Jamies last day

Amy comes out when Jamie walks with her head down
Amy comes out when Jamie can only frown
Amy is Jamies makeup when Jamie is down

Only a gallon of water fits into a gallon
Jamies feelings flooded her heart
Jameis heart burst with fear
she thought her end was near
she dident know it was already here

Amy comes out when Jamie walks with her head down
Amy comes out when Jamie can only frown
Amy is Jamies makeup when Jamie is down





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Re: Amy (User Rating: 1 )
by NobodySpecial on Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 12:10:10 AM AEST
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I really like this poem. You have to think while you read it in order to follow it correctly but that is only part of the reason why it is so tantalizing to read. Good job, i like your style.


Re: Amy (User Rating: 1 )
by Avarice_Riot on Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 12:15:38 AM AEST
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I agree with the other comment, I really liked reading this. So this Amy is a sort of alter ego or imaginary friend? I have lots of those. Anyway, very cool poem, keep on writing!


Re: Amy (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowDaughter on Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 12:28:22 AM AEST
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*dumbstruck*

This touched me more than maybe any other poem on YPDC ever has . . . I didn't need to read this twice to understand it because from the first stanza on, it struck such a chord that I was, and still am, pretty near breathless. I know this poem, and this story, all too well . . . thank you for posting it, and for lending it a dignity it seldom has.

--Nora


Re: Amy (User Rating: 1 )
by CrimsonTears on Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 07:03:27 PM AEST
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wow...this is a great poem....very touching and meaningful...awesome job

Lots of Love
CrimsonTears


Re: Amy (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 04:28:56 PM AEST
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nice write- and I didn't have to read it twice either, I think you make yourself clear, and offer this beautifully.




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