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Array ( [sid] => 59499 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Try [time] => 2004-08-09 16:07:56 [hometext] => This will be my last post, as I am shipping out, this site has helped me out a lot, thanks to all of you [bodytext] => Happiness over shadowing all of the pain
Your smile taking away much of my shame
Your eyes calm me from my heightened state
You are keeping me from my eventual fate
Letting me live another day
I wish I could repay you some way

Hold on while you still have me
Hold on or I will fall down
Remember these days we had together
Remember them when I am no longer around

I can not escape my fate forever
I can not help looking over my shoulder
So do not blame me for living as a shell
Come with me now and together we'll dwell
Since I started talking my life has been changed
And I never want to go back to being estranged

I release the pain I feel now
I release it to the sky
I want to be with you
And I will never cease to try [comments] => 7 [counter] => 236 [topic] => 22 [informant] => poet_of_anger [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Try

Contributed by poet_of_anger on Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 04:07:56 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Happiness over shadowing all of the pain
Your smile taking away much of my shame
Your eyes calm me from my heightened state
You are keeping me from my eventual fate
Letting me live another day
I wish I could repay you some way

Hold on while you still have me
Hold on or I will fall down
Remember these days we had together
Remember them when I am no longer around

I can not escape my fate forever
I can not help looking over my shoulder
So do not blame me for living as a shell
Come with me now and together we'll dwell
Since I started talking my life has been changed
And I never want to go back to being estranged

I release the pain I feel now
I release it to the sky
I want to be with you
And I will never cease to try

Copyright © poet_of_anger ... [ 2004-08-09 16:07:56]
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Re: Try (User Rating: 1 )
by waos on Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 04:13:51 PM AEST
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This was the first thing of yours that I have read and I really really liked it. I could see similarities in your circumstances to mine. Thanks for posting it, I really enjoyed it.

Re: Try (User Rating: 1 )
by Katie2008 on Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 04:16:38 PM AEST
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I liked this poem a lot. It was beautiful and it flowed nicely. I'm so sad that you're leaving! :[
Katie

Re: Try (User Rating: 1 )
by yellow_sundragon on Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 04:52:42 PM AEST
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So the Poet of Anger is angered no longer, I am happy for you. Though I will say that I hope you try to write happy poems now to replace the angry ones, rather than fade away...

Jaime

Re: Try (User Rating: 1 )
by Nazmythian on Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 05:27:03 PM AEST
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Godspeed, kind sir. May you find your self safely home. Thank you for your kind words of my efforts. I look forward to a day when you can again do battle on paper with words. A wonderful write ... you shall be missed.

Naz ~

Re: Try (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 05:47:00 PM AEST
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I wish you the best of luck. May an angel protect you from harm. God speed.

Rita

Re: Try (User Rating: 1 )
by Lovingangel4u on Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 06:02:20 PM AEST
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Another lovely write your poems have gone from strength to strength. I hope you will one day write here again. I wish you all the very best take care and may God be with you always.
~Carmen~

Re: Try (User Rating: 1 )
by outsider on Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 05:39:05 AM AEST
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This is an excellent write, one of the best poems i've read on this site. Good luck to you, all the best, and i hope you continue to write.

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